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[se7enstars]

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1) The 20th of July weather was very good. 2) The sun was shined and was not wind . 3) On this day celebrated two holiday “Day Town” and “Day Mettallurg”. 4) At 10:00 a.m. people of the town Zarinsk went to the stadium”Youth”. 5) There were exhibition and sport competition. 6) A lot of people came to see it all. 7) They photographed and bought things. 8) More on stadium was a ballon. 9) On the square near fountain could be seen beautiful married. 10) Also there were competitions for children. 11) On square near the Palace Mettallurg in the evening was consert. 12) There were a lot of people who listened to the singers. 13) People listened Vladimir Kislov,ensemble”Russian song”,Nadezhda Babkina and Ricci e Poveri. 14) The consert went very well. 15) Some people danced and sang songs. 16) Those that were near the stage photographed singers. 17) After the consert was a beautiful salute. 18) All were funny memories.

[Larisa]

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