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Они не используют выражение "сидеть в Интернете". Замените на browse the Internet / surf the InternetKrylovaNastya писал(а):sitting on the Internet
in a useful wayIrinaLos писал(а):makes people spend their time with useful way.
opportunitiesIrinaLos писал(а):more business opportunity.
The internet is the best gift of the twenty-first century. It helps us to study, communicate with each other and even have fun. However, some people are sure that the global web is a real time killer. (* Ensure you put spaces after commas and periods, especially when starting a new sentence-this happens throughout the essay)sunandflowers писал(а):The Internet is the best gift of twenty-first century.It helps us to study,to communicate with each other and even to have fun.However,some people are sure that global web is a real time killer.
sunandflowers писал(а):Firstly,almost each of us has a page in the social nets like Facebook or Twitter
sunandflowers писал(а):.Sometimes chatting really make you you spend whole night sending and receiving the messages.
Second, the internet is full of attractive links.sunandflowers писал(а):Secondly,Internet is full of attractive links.
There are huge amounts of funny videos, instructional pictures and text that will answer all your questions.sunandflowers писал(а):There are huge amount of funny videos,instructive pictures and texts that will answer to all your questions.
They say that everyone has a sense of balance, which will remind a person when he or she should stop surfing the net.sunandflowers писал(а):They say that everybody have a sense of proportion that will remind person when he or she sholud stop to serf the Net.
In my opinion, the internet can be seriously distracting.sunandflowers писал(а):In my opinion,the Internet seriously distract attention
There is advice that says to ask your parents to remind you about the time you have spent using the internet.sunandflowers писал(а):There is advice that says ask your parents to remind you about the time that you already have spent.
The global netsunandflowers писал(а):The global Net contains
"internet" is not really a proper noun, therefore doesn't need to be capitalizedKrylovaNastya писал(а):t’s generally believed that sitting on the Internet is a good way of spending time.
KrylovaNastya писал(а):First of all, it helps people unwind after a working day by playing games, reading news, articles on topics they are interested in.
KrylovaNastya писал(а):some think that the Internet can bring a lot of harms to young children and distract them from school.
KrylovaNastya писал(а):Sometimes they talk to friends, watch videos forgetting about homework and books.
we can find a lot of books on the internet and read them without having to pay a lot of money.KrylovaNastya писал(а):It may be true, but it seems to me that we can find a lot of books on the Internet and just read them not paying much money
(*this statement is contradictory) To summarize, I would like to stress that the internet can be wasteful of one's time, but also can open up many opportunities.KrylovaNastya писал(а):To summarize, I would like to stress that the Internet is the best time waster which opens up many opportunities
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