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Сообщение Alina » 10.05.2015, 16:47

Family is the most important thing in our life.

Nowadays, a lot of people forget about family because they have friends and classmates. How long times ago did you call your mother and father? When did you meet your grandparents? Let’s try to know, why it is happens.

We remember about our family when we have some problems. For example: at school, at work, with money and so on. However, when everything is ok we prefer to do not pay attention for them. In these moments we start to forget that they need our help too. It may be usual things – bring big bags from the food shop, do the washing-up, or just clean the sofa. But if one day your mother will call you and ask to go with her in the shop, you should know that she wants to meet and see you. Everyone needs to have a person or people, he can rely on. It is our family, which will never betrays you. And when your grandmother asks you to teach her how to use a computer, just remember that she teached you how to walk.

From my point of view, I completely agree with this statement. Family teaches us to respect other people, be kind and helps your friends, when they need it.
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Сообщение Proofreader » 26.05.2015, 16:58

Alina писал(а):How long times ago did you call your mother and father?
How long ago did you call your mother and father?
Alina писал(а):Let’s try to know, why it is happens.
Let's try to figure out why this happens.
Alina писал(а):We remember about our family when we have some problems.
We tend to remember our families when we have problems.
Alina писал(а):However, when everything is ok we prefer to do not pay attention for them.
However, when everything is ok, we do not pay any attention to them.
Alina писал(а):t may be usual things – bring big bags from the food shop, do the washing-up, or just clean the sofa.
do the washing
Alina писал(а):But if one day your mother will call you and ask to go with her in the shop, you should know that she wants to meet and see you.
But if one day your mother calls and asks you to go with her to the shop
Alina писал(а):It is our family, which will never betrays you.
It is our family who will never betray us.
Alina писал(а):And when your grandmother asks you to teach her how to use a computer, just remember that she teached you how to walk.
just remember that she taught you how to walk
Alina писал(а):Family teaches us to respect other people, be kind and helps your friends, when they need it.
Family teaches us to respect other people; be kind and help your friends when they need it.
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