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**Kirill** » 13.01.2016, 11:04

Nowadays pets have an exceptional place in our life. There are two opposite opinions about the fact pets make your home the best place. I will try to express my point of view on the following statement. I suppose,that domestic animals influence in a positive way on homely atmosphere. Firstly, they help relieve stress, because they withdraw a negative energy. Secondly, pets make your home more comfortable and cordial. They are the best friends for people. Majority of people prefer animals of their choice. Newertheless, we can find a contrary point of view. Some people think that having pets at home is a bad choice because they can get into trouble. Firstly, it necessary to look after and to take care of pets. It gives a lot of work to domestic duties. Secondly, a pet needs additional expenses on nutrition. I can not agree with this opinion. As for me I prefer have pets at home because it is perfect. In conclusion, I want to say that domestic animals are the best choice for stress situation. Pets make your home more comfortable.

**kotov_sergey** » 13.01.2016, 12:24

И что нужно сделать? Проверить типа?

**Kirill** » 13.01.2016, 16:27

Оцените Эссе,заранее спасибо.

Nowadays pets have an exceptional place in our life. There are two opposite opinions about the fact pets make your home the best place. I will try to express my point of view on the following statement.

I suppose,that domestic animals influence in a positive way on homely atmosphere. Firstly, they help relieve stress, because they withdraw a negative energy. Secondly, pets make your home more comfortable and cordial. They are the best friends for people. Majority of people prefer animals of their choice.

Newertheless, we can find a contrary point of view. Some people think that having pets at home is a bad choice because they can get into trouble. Firstly, it necessary to look after and to take care of pets. It gives a lot of work to domestic duties. Secondly, a pet needs additional expenses on nutrition. I can not agree with this opinion. As for me I prefer have pets at home because it is perfect.

In conclusion, I want to say that domestic animals are the best choice for stress situation. Pets make your home more comfortable.

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**English Guru** » 18.01.2016, 14:01

Kirill писал(а):I suppose,that

Запятая не нужна

Kirill писал(а):relieve stress, because

Запятая перед because не ставиться

Kirill писал(а):withdraw a negative energy

артикль лишний, неисчисляемое сущ.

Kirill писал(а):Majority of people prefer

The majority of people prefers

Kirill писал(а):it necessary to look

it is

Kirill писал(а):I prefer have pets

having

Kirill писал(а):I can not agree with this opinion. As for me I prefer have pets at home because it is perfect.

Это в отдельный абзац.

Неплохо, все ошибки понятны?

**Kirill** » 18.01.2016, 19:02

I prefer having pets- это герундий? Спасибо вам большое!

**English Guru** » 19.01.2016, 16:46

Kirill писал(а):I prefer having pets- это герундий?

Да. Модели такие:
I prefer having
I would prefer to have

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