Traveling abroad helps to understand your own country

[Chauysha]

Nowadays we have an excellent opportunity to travel abroad because most countries are open for us. Let us speculate, if it is true that culture, story, life arrangement of another contry help us to understand our own one.

In my opinion, only travelling to other countries can help you to understand your own deeper and more complex. Firstly, you can know your country from various sides because another country is like a mirror. Secondly, while travelling you will transform your world view and wide outlook, so your relative to place where you live in will change extremely.

However, there are contrary point of view. Some people believe that travelling cannot help you to know a lot about your own country because you can change your mind to negative way, so this fact will prevent you. Also opponents convince that you can just read some books or watch some films about countries abroad instead going there.

To some extent it is right, but I think you have to know about weak and strength sides of something to love it and only traveling, only your own experience can provide you object and colorful view on your country.

Sum up, all of the things we can know just only when we compare and contrast them with others.

[English Guru]

contry

country

so your relative to place

relation ???

where you live in

когда есть "where" убираем предлог в конце
where you live

However, there are contrary point of view.

contrary points / a contrary point

you can change your mind to negative way

in a negitive way

so this fact will prevent you.

from what?

Also opponents convince that

are convinced

films about countries abroad instead

films about faraway countries instead

instead going there.

instead of going there

about weak and strength sides

strong sides

can provide you object

colorful view on your country

Видимо, view of ??
http://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/view_1

Sum up,

To sum it up,

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10/14 - все ошибки понятны?

[Chauysha]

Спасибо огромное!
Не совсем: почему are convinced?

[English Guru]

Не совсем: почему are convinced?

Перечитал Ваше предложение, у Вас тоже правильно Видимо, когда читал первый раз, неправильно понял.

[lejuliz]

Some people claim that traveling abroad is the best way to understand your country, while others argue that only traveling about own country can bring to human a broad picture of the native country.
I agree with the point of view that traveling overseas helps to understand your country. Firstly, when human learn the traditions of different countries he or she is beginning to compare the customs of mother country with others. Thereby, the human finds out the new facts about own country that he or she has not known before. Secondly, traveling abroad, people communicate with people variety nationalities. Foreigners can talk to person about what the features about his/her country are surprised they.
However, some people think that traveling to others county is the worst way to understand own country. They explain it by the fact that being abroad, people find out something only about other region and nothing about own.
I cannot agree with this point of view completely because traveling overseas can give to human a fresh view about the political situation in his/her country.
To sum up, there are different points of view on this problem. Despite other people's opinion, I still believe that traveling abroad helps to learn the world and better understand own country.

[SophiaKhokkanen]

Здравствуйте! Я готоволюсь к ЕГЭ по английскому и прошу проверить мое сочинение.

Traveling abroad helps to understand your own coutry.

It's generally believed that travelling abroad can expand your world outlook. Of course, if you travel a lot you can view new countries and their traditions. But how can travelling help to understand your own country?

I think that when we travel we can compare different countries to each other and after we return home we can look at ours in a new way. The basic reasons of our new feelings about homeland are meetings with new people and knowledge about others traditions. Thus, people may understand differences between our country and others. The second reason for travelling is possibility to make your life brighter and more interesting. And finally, traveling is a good chance to learn new languages.

However, there is another point of view on travelling. Many people think that travelling is very expensive and takes a lot of time. In addition they consider it dangerous.

I disagree with this opinion. Of course, you have to take into consideration the fact that travelling means getting out of your comfort zone. But also travelling is an amazing adventure. I definitely feel that any type of travelling (cheap or expensive) can open your eyes and bring you new feelings.

Taking everything into account, it must be said that firstly, travelling makes your a more open and more knowledgeable person. Secondly, it dosen't matter if you have a budget trip or a luxurious one, it will teach you another customs and give you a new sight of your homeland.

[helena70]

I disagree with this opinion. - Nevertherless, I cannot agree with the opinion mentioned above for a particular reason. Дальше нужно опровергнуть точку зрения других людей и дать сильный аргумент.
В первом абзаце нет постановки проблемы.