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Education hasn't changed at all over the decades

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Сообщение 380990087898 » 26.04.2016, 22:45

As far as our world is concerned, it changes permanently. Nothing remains the same. However, some people claim that education has not changed throughout the years.

As for me, I do not share such an opinion. I am sure that, on the contrary, education has changed a lot. First and foremost, modern technologies are involved not only in our lives, but also in education. Nowadays it is very popular to find everyrhing on the Internet, download files, write tests online and check answers immediately. Online books are more popular than paper ones. Moreover, education is determined to be effective and productive. That is why professors, teachers, lecturers try to find new methods of teaching, which should be connected with students' preferences and interests. Besides, lots of things are still unlnown. Scientists make iscoveries, invent new things. They try to find keys to all enigmas.

On the other hand, some people claim that education has not changed. We go to school, finish it, enter the university, graduate. And this formula has always been the same. Nobody will abolish at least one point from this list.

In fact, education is not only the process of visiting a definite establishment. It is also gainig new information, broadening the mind, learnig, which is much more important.

Summing up, I am sure that education changes constantly, because it depends on a few factors, for example, the century, which are not stable.



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Сообщение English Guru » 06.05.2016, 00:55

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Сообщение Danil.K. » 20.05.2016, 21:29

Nowadays, some individuals consider that education has not changed at all for decades. They tend to think there are many similarities between modern and old-fashioned education. However, others do not share this opinion.

Personally I am sure that education has been forming for years and today it is quite different to previous. To begin with, today pupils can interact with teachers more freely. They can ask questions on different topics, argue their point of view and even quarrel and disagree with teacher's opinion while, for instance, in old times the could be punished for these actions.
Also, nowadays school and universities tend to have only qualified teachers with diplomas of high education. besides, today education is provided with much more convenient conditions.
For example, there is quite permanent temperature in school classrooms thanks to warm battery.

Nevertheless, there is an opposite option. claim that nowadays education is the same as early. Firstly, some people consider that students still have no enough rights at school.
Secondly, they claim that our governments do not spend enough money on modern education as well as early.

As for me, I disagree with the opposite opinion. In fact, today students are provided with rights and protected by the law as never before. Moreover, government, for instance, of Russia annually spend millions to maintain the quality of education.

To sum up, modern education has already changes and has many positives sides. However, there are countless things we should to complete and improve.
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Сообщение English Guru » 03.06.2016, 13:44

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Сообщение alise » 03.06.2016, 18:42

Hey there! I would be very thankfull, if you check my work :^) And thank you for your nice forum, helps me a lot. (I'm writing here for the first time)

Education has become an imprescriptible part of our life. Nowadays there exist limitless variety of programmes given at institutions. But is there really something new in education systems of our time? Some people believe that it has not changed since the 1950s. Let us speculate, however, what stands behind it.

I personaly believe that education has changed a lot over the last few decades. Firstly, a lot of new directions have been opened -- Genetics, for example. Secondly, new methods of teaching and learning of different areas of knowlegde were developed. Moreover, education has changed qualitatively. Nowadays it is embarassing to know only one foreign language and to not succeed in at least couple of disciplines. What we have today is a unique experience of teaching people various disciplines in educational institutions from all over the world. Education system a few, even a couple decades ago has nothing to compare with that.

However, some people believe that education was, is and always will be the same. They claim that any new thing in education would it be a new method of teaching or a new way to learn things is actually based on the old, classic education. Moreover, they believe that new ways of teaching are not prooved to be successful methods.

I can not but agree that classic education is the basis, on which all of our todays education stands. However I disagree with the above statement, because if the world will not accept the progress of education, there wont be a progress in other aspects of our life. It is important to renew and find new methods, new abilities in education, because it gives a development to our society.

To sum it up, I should say that the ways of getting an education is a controversal issue, so it is up to a person whether adopt changes in education or not.

310 words -- I know it's too much, but what sould i delete from my essay, to make it smaller, but still working?
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