Life in the countryside is not for young people.

[matrewka]

Living in the countryside is not very popular nowadays. Most of teenagers prefer noisy and active life in a city center. But there are teens who really love hot sun and calm life near the Nature.

In my opinion, life near the Nature is not for young people. Many teenagers love active city life more than calm and peaceful life in the countryside. Furthermore, there are less places in the countryside where teenagers can spend their time with friends, for example shops, clubs, cinemas. Also, living in the countryside involves manual work, such as wood-chopping or fishing. Lots of teenagers hate it.

There is another opinion. Calm and peaceful life in the countryside affects teenagers positively. It helps to build character as well. Furthermore, living near the Nature really improves your healths. Also, people who work hard since their childhood are very successful in future life.

I disagree with the opposing opinion. It is better when teenagers form their characters at schools in a group of other people in modern conditions. Also, lots of teens do a pert-time job. It brings them some money and working experience.

To sum up, teenagers should live in a modern city to develop their mind and character. Countryside might be very boring for them.

***Буду признателен проверке***

[Ivan the Great.]

Я, конечно, не проверяющий. До EnglishGuru мне далеко, но я бы написал так:

1. "Nowadays it is not very popular to live in the countryside. Some of teenagers prefer noisy and active life in a city while others love calm life near the nature."

[English Guru]

Ivan the Great., я всегда говорил, что эссе для ЕГЭ, это не творчество, а соблюдение формальных правил написания эссе. Поэтому я указываю только на ошибки, за которые точно будут снижать баллы.

noisy and active life

and calm life

active city life

a noisy and active life
http://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/life

life near the Nature

C маленькой буквы, без артикля

there are less places

fewer places

improves your healths

improves your health

a pert-time job.

part-time

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