A person who is fluent in a foreign language can easily teach it. Эссе

[amerius]

People have been learning foreign languages since time immemorial. Today we still want to know more and more languages. The popularity of teachers of foreign languages increases. Whether people aware a foreign language can teach it? Now I would like to express my point of view on this issue.
In my opinion, it does not matter if a person knows language well or bad he cannot teach it people. First of all, teaching language needs qualified workers. I think only real teachers with professional education can transmit correct knowledge. For example, it is important to know different styles of language, furthermore to know native language properly. Besides, many people with knowledge of foreign language do mistakes. Secondly, even if a person knows language the best way he cannot teach people to understand a foreign speech more correctly. This factor depends on people’s mind. If a person does not want to understand information he will never understand it.
On the other hand, some people believe that it is better to learn a foreign language with a person who is fluent in it. They say that you hardly will make a success by yourself, because there is no one who will help you with advice.
I strongly disagree with this statement, because to train people a foreign language can a person who sure in his own knowledge.
Despite other people’s opinion, I still believe, that only real teachers of language can train people. Teaching needs a good education.
244 слова, 50минут

[English Guru]

Whether people aware a foreign language can teach it?

Лексическая ошибка, препятствующая пониманию текста. Осознают ли люди, что иностранный язык может обучать это? Изучите особенности глагола aware. Задание: перефразируйте.

if a person knows language well or bad

Артикль и Грамматика: if a person knows a language well or badly

he cannot teach it people.

Управление глагола teach, лексика: либо teach it, либо teach people, либо teach it to people.

First of all, teaching language

Артикль: teaching a language. Любое исчисляемое неабстрактое существительное должно иметь артикль!

furthermore to know native language properly

their native language, либо артикль

many people with knowledge of foreign language

Артикль: a foreign language. Любое исчисляемое неабстрактое существительное должно иметь артикль! Тем более, тут описательное определение "foreign"!

they say that you hardly will make

Порядок слов: you will hardly make. Наречие ставится после вспомогательного глагола, но перед смысловым!

will make a success by yourself

Лексика: запоминаем две устойчивые фразы, либо to make progress, либо to achieve success.

by yourself, because there

disagree with this statement, because to train people

Запятая перед because в своём обычном значении причины не ставится.

can a person who sure in his own knowledge.

Грамматика: нет смыслового глагола to be, who is sure

still believe, that

Нет там запятой, в английском языке в сложноподчиненных предложения нет запятых.

that only real teachers of language can train people.

real language teachers, либо снова артикль

Teaching needs a good education.

Артикль: тут перебор needs good education - неисчисляемое существительное

Коэффициенты:

К1 (решение коммуникативной задачи): 3
К2 (организация текста): 3
К3 (лексика): 2
K4 (грамматика): 1
К5 (орфография и пунктуация): 1

ИТОГ: 10/14

Достойная работа, чтобы улучшить свой результат, Вам необходимо прочитать про запятые http://englishgu.ru/zapjatye-v-anglijskom/ и запомнить информацию про артикль выше.

[amerius]

Спасибо большое! Да,с артиклем серьезные проблемы:)

[Nancy]

Извините, если пишу не там. Заметила еще ошибку в данном эссэ ( от 11.01.14)
делать ошибки - make mistakes, not do mistakes/

[English Guru]

Nancy, Правильно, когда много ошибок, уже глаза замыливаются. Также возможно, что ошибка пропала пока я форматировал текст.

[vladtheimpaler]

In our modern society everyone wants to speak a foreign language. There are two opposite opinions concerning what of knowledge should a person have to become a professional linguist. Many people think that a occupation of a foreign language teacher requires only general skills like a fluency, which anyone can learn by herself or himself. While others claim that a person is obliged to have a lot of additional language knowledge. Who is right?

In my opinion, a common knowledge in a foreign language is not enough to be a teacher.

Firstly, a foreign language teacher is one of the most complicated jobs on Earth because it is related with a cooperation with kids, who so young enough to understand definition of words, idioms, and peculiar rules of a foreign language. That is why a teacher must be aware of special techniques and methods of teaching. Besides, he or she has to show an example of behaviour to pupils.

Furthemore, fluency does not guarantee an abilty to translate from a foreign language. Except a perfect knowledge in a foreign language a person has to know his or her native language on the highest level. Also, languages develop everytime and there are lots of new styles appear such as a buisness language which includes its own phrases and words. It approves that fluency is just a drop in the ocean.

On the other hand, millions of people believe that a teaching of a foreign language is an easy occupation, a person needs only to be fluent. Also, these people are convinced that anyone can become a teacher without studying in a university.

I totally disagree with this opinion, every teacher should be graduated. Diploma defines a level of a personal knowledge. No one employer approves a non-certificated person for a work as a teacher.

In conclusion, i want to emphasis an importance of a higher education for teachers, a person should not be arrogant and do not ask specialists and professionals for help or an advice. A professional teacher has to be developed person in any field of life.

Dear Mr.English Guru i need your help!

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Кстати, в сочинении 348 слов, не слишком ли много?

[Shadow804]

vladtheimpaler, Вообще, слишком) Их должно быть не больше 275 максимум, кажется. А лучше уложиться в 250) Иначе отсчитают 275 слов, а дальше даже читать не будут.

There are two opposite opinions concerning what of knowledge should a person have to become a professional linguist

what knowledge, не надо тут of. И потом у вас порядок слов неправильный, должен быть прямой порядок слов. a person should have to become...

a occupation of a foreign language teacher requires only general skills like a fluency

a occupation быть никак не может. Может только an/the occupation. А здесь, наверное, the.
a fluency - без артикля.

which anyone can learn by herself or himself

Everyone. Здесь же не вопрос и не отрицание.

Деление на абзацы у вас неправильное. Первый абзац- вступление, второй - ваше мнение+аргументы, третий - противоположное мнение, четверный - почему вы не согласны с противоположной позицией, пятый - заключение.

because it is related with a cooperation with kid

related to
connected with
артикль перед cooperation не нужен

who so young enough to understand

забыли глагол to be
who are too young to understand или who are young enough to understand. So уберите

peculiar rules of a foreign language

немного натянуто звучит. Может, лучше просто grammar или inns and outs of a foreign language - тонкости/детали)

he or she has to show an example of behaviour to pupils

set an example for/serve as an example to/give an example to будет лучше. Хотя behavior здесь не очень уместно. Показать пример поведения? Он уже языку детей учит)

Also, languages develop everytime and there are lots of new styles appear such as a buisness language which includes its own phrases and words

В первой части предложения вы говорите о процессе (язык меняется, постоянно появляются новые слова, редактируются правила, поэтому используйте лучше Present Continuous и everytime замените на другое наречие - constantly, например). С лексикой здесь тоже все не очень гладко. Include звучит довольно странно; which has/is characterised/contain даже
после also запятая не нужна, если я не ошибаюсь.

that a teaching

не нужен артикль

needs only to be fluent

я бы сказал only needs to be fluent

studying in a university

без артикля

No one employer approves a

No employer просто) или no one без существительного далее
после approve идет предлог of

for a work

work - неисчисляемое существительное, не может употребляться с неопределенным артиклем.

to emphasis

to emphasise

an importance of a higher education for teachers

Опять с артиклями намудрили)

a person should not be arrogant and do not ask specialists and professionals for help or an advice

advice - тоже неисчисляемое, поэтому без артикля. Но мне вообще эта часть непонятна. Как она соотносится с тем, что вы говорите в начале заключения? и после should not be arrogant вы пишите do not ask. У вас там есть отрицание через модальный глагол, потом вы второе примешиваете. Трудно понять, что вы вообще хотели сказать)

Except a perfect knowledge in a foreign language

Apart from smth ... knowledge без артикля обычно идет опять же.

anyone can become a teacher without studying in a university

опять everyone; at university

У вас довольно много мелких ошибок (артикли, неисчисляемые/абстрактные существительные, местоимения), а также лексических повторов.

Придерживайтесь плана (который я изложил), не начинайте каждый аргумент с нового абзаца. Используйте синонимы, старайтесь передать мысль другими словами, разнообразить ваше эссе. Помните, что даже вступление не должно повторять то высказывание, которое вам дано в качестве опорной точки. Нужно переформулировать его. И лимит по количеству слов вы, конечно, превысили.

Может, я что-то упустил, сказал неправильно) Ждем English Guru.

[lkyoung]

проверьте пожалуйста....написала впервые С2, поэтому интересно чужое мнение :)

In today's world, knowledge of a foreign language broadens the mind, makes easy understanding between interlocutors and gives advantage throughout. Some people are written on special language courses, others have studied it in school. But unless the person is capable, knowing a foreign language is to teach it to others?
In my opinion, it is possible. Firstly, these people can give information that you will not find in a usual textbook. Moreover, they help to settle in a foreign environment. Secondly, teaching others, the man himself is constantly learning. He sees what had not noticed, thereby improving his knowledge.
On the other hand, some people believe that to learn the language better by native speakers. A foreigner can tell you about of the features of speech and culture.
Nevertheless, one should accept that not everyone has enough money to take a foreign teacher. Therefore, it is not available to everyone.
To sum it up, it goes without saying that the study of foreign languges is not easy. To achieve the desired result need to exert a lot of effort. No teacher will be able to help if a person is unwilling to learn.

Объем: 192 слова
заранее спасибо :)

[English Guru]

In today's world,

запятая не ставится

makes easy understanding between interlocutors

порядок слов, возможно, будет лучше makes understanding between interlocutors easier

Some people are written on special language courses,

Люди написаны? Страдательный залог здесь неуместен. Some people attend special language courses ...

But unless the person is capable, knowing a foreign language is to teach it to others?

Не понимаю.

He sees what had not noticed,

He or she sees ...

He sees what had not noticed,

Время и залог неправильные. Возможно, He or she can see what others have not noticed ...

improving his knowledge

his or her

On the other hand, some people believe that to learn the language better by native speakers.

some people believe that it is better to learn ... - грамматика, порядок слов

A foreigner can tell you about of the features

of - лишнее

languges

languages

To achieve the desired result need to exert a lot of effort.

Отсутствует подлежащее. Например, To achieve the desired result one needs to exert ...

lkyoung, неплохое эссе для первого раза. Структура и лексика на приличном уровне. Орфография и пунктуация хромает. А вот на грамматику обратите особое внимание!

[vladtheimpaler]

In our modern society everyone wants to speak a foreign language. There are two opposite opinions concerning what knowledge a person should have to become a professional linguist. Many people think that occupation of a foreign language teacher requires only general skills like a fluency, which anyone can learn by herself or himself. While others claim that a person is obliged to have a lot of additional language knowledge. Who is right?

In my opinion, fluency is not enough to be a teacher. Firstly, a foreign language teacher is one of the most complicated jobs on Earth because it implies cooperation with kids, who are too young to understand definition of words, idioms, and grammar rules of unknown language. That is why a teacher must be aware of special techniques and methods of teaching. Furthermore, fluency does not guarantee translating ability. Besides having perfect knowledge in a foreign language a person has to know his or her native language on the highest level.

On the other hand, millions of people believe that general skills play main role in becoming of a teacher. Also, these people are convinced that anyone can become a teacher without studying in university.

I totally disagree with this opinion, every teacher should be graduated. Diploma defines a level of a personal knowledge. Additionally, no employer approves of a non-certificated person for work as a teacher.

In conclusion, I want to say that not everyone can be a teacher because it is a hard work and this one requires not only an experienced and developed but a tolerate person with steely nervous.

Я исправил. Посмотрите, пожалуйста, может я что-то упустил

[English Guru]

that occupation of a foreign language teacher

the occupation

only general skills like a fluency

fluency - без артикля (неисчисляемое)

definition of words

definitions, я бы сказал

and grammar rules of unknown language.

an unknown language

Besides having perfect knowledge in a foreign language a person has to know his or her native language on the highest level.

Запятая перед a person

that general skills play main role

the main role - устойчиво

main role in becoming of a teacher.

Become используется без предлога.

studying in university

at the university

a level of a personal knowledge

the level - ведь там дальше идёт of-фраза

with steely nervous.

with steely nerves

На этот раз много ошибок в предлогах и артиклях, потеряете несколько баллов.

[polisha]

Some people believe a person to educate people with a foreign language if he or she speaks the language fluently. But other people are against this opinion. Let us consider who is right.
I agree with the opinion that one can not teach the language if one knows a foreign language at the level of speech. First of all, the person is expected to know the grammatical, spelling and punctuation rules in order to teach the language. Secondly, the person must be aware of many nuances of the language to be ready to answer the any student's question. Finally, the person must be confident in his/her knowlrdge of the foreign language.
On the other hand, people believe one to teach the language if he/she speaks on it. Firstly, they suppose the fluent knowledge of language is enough to give it for students. In addition. they believe the English speech would be helpful in learning.
Nevertheless, giving the foreign language to students requires the full knowing of all aspects of it.
Having discussed advantages and disadvantages of the issue, I can sum up that to be teacher the person must learn the foreign language thoroughtly in order to give the true knowledge to students.
Проверьте, пожалуйста

[English Guru]

Some people believe a person to educate

Какое-то слово пропущено, can educate

to educate people with a foreign language

Зачем обучать людей с иностранным языком? Тема не об этом. Исправляйте лексику

if one knows a foreign language at the level of speech

Это калька с русского языка, перефразируйте, да и, вообще, избегайте подобных неоднозначных выражений.

to be ready to answer the any student's question

to answer any student's question - без артикля

in his/her

his or her - никаких сокращений и непонятных символов в эссе не пишем

knowlrdge

knowledge

people believe one to teach the language if he/she speaks on it.

Лексика, предложение непонятно. Speaks it - без предлога.

fluent knowledge of language is enough to give it for students

a language; to give it to students

the English speech

Причем здесь английский язык внезапно? Сочинение про иностранные языки.

In addition.

In addition,

to be teacher the person

a person - любой человек, почему определенный-то?

thoroughtly

thoroughly

-2 балла лексика
-1 балл грамматика
-1 балл орфография и пунктуация
-1 балл решение коммуникативной задачи

ИТОГ: 9/14

Мне не очень понравилось, но 9 баллов Вы набрали.

[Ivan the Great.]

English, Spanish, French, German. Nowadays it’s very popular to learn different languages. Any person can choose any language to learn. However, can a person who is fluent in a foreign language easily teach it? Let’s discuss this issue.

In my opinion, a person can be a language teacher only if he or she has graduated as a professional in this area. Firstly, common knowledge of different languages does not give a person an opportunity to teach them. Secondly, only a professional teacher can give best grammar knowledge of a language that someone is learning, as well as pronounce recommendations and so on.

However, there are people who believe that if a person wants to learn a foreign language it is better to do it with a native speaker. They say that a foreigner can tell more about the speech and culture.Moreover, they argue that anyone can become a teacher without studying at an University.

I'm completely disagree with this position, it cannot go further than being an immature claim. Firstly, there is big a difference between a native speaker and a professional teacher, sometimes native speakers do not know their native language as well as they should. Secondly, no one can teach a foreign language before graduating from a University, because every teacher should be graduated. In my opinion, the Diploma defines a level of a personal knowledge.

To sum up, I want to say that if a person wants to learn any language he or she should better do it with a professional teacher.

Приблизительно 255 :)

С нетерпением жду критики в мой адрес!

[English Guru]

С нетерпением жду критики в мой адрес!

Перед созданием новой темы убедитесь, что эссе с такой темой действительно нет на форуме (что бывает очень редко).

Let’s discuss

Let us

if a person wants to learn a foreign language it is better to do

требуется запятая
if a person wants to learn a foreign language, it is better to do

I'm completely disagree

Запомните: I agree / I disagree (это глаголы, а не прилагательные, поэтому I'm не нужно)

University, because every teacher

запятая не нужна

defines a level of a personal knowledge.

the level of personal knowledge

if a person wants to learn any language he or she should better

if a person wants to learn any language, he or she should better

13/14 Очень достойная работа!

[Dalydudan]

Советую сделать красные пометки-исправления в тексте, а то весьма неприятно читать и наматывать на ус сочинение, в котором, как ты знаешь, куча ошибок... Фух, специально для этого зарегался.

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[b]еще ошибочка[/b]
because to train people a foreign language can a person who sure in his own knowledge. тут тоже ошибка. надо "only a person who is sure in his own knowledge can teach people a foreign language"

[julioyn]

Nowadays it is very popular to learn different languages. Any person can choose any language to learn. So, can a person who is fluent in a foreign language teach it?

In my opinion, a person can be a language teacher only if he or she graduated as a professional in this area. Firstly, a foreign language teacher is one of the most complicated jobs because it is related to cooperation with kids, who are too young to understand definition of words, idioms and grammar of foreign language. That is why a teacher must be aware of special techniques and methods of teaching. Secondly, fluency does not guarantee an ability to translate from a foreign language properly. Finally, a qualified teacher knows such things which cannot be found in any textbook.

An opposite opinion is that teaching of foreign languages is an easy occupation, a person only needs to be fluent. Also, these people are convinced that anyone can become a teacher without studying in university.

I cannot agree with this opinion, every teacher should be graduated. Diploma defines a level of a personal knowledge. No employer approves of non-certificated person for a work as a teacher.

To sum up, I can say that if a person wants to learn any language, he or she should better do it with a professional teacher.