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запятая перед that не нужнаIvan the Great. писал(а):But is it really so, that extreme
influence a personIvan the Great. писал(а):which influence on a person who does sport
лишняя запятая перед riskIvan the Great. писал(а):understands that, risk is an essential part of the extreme
he or she needsIvan the Great. писал(а):if a person wants to become successful he needs to discard his fears and go forward.
I categorically disagree или completelyIvan the Great. писал(а):I'm categorically disagree
sportIvan the Great. писал(а):that the sport helps
they just changeChauysha писал(а):it just change
rabbit and habit have nothing in commonChauysha писал(а):habbit
influence как глагол - без предлогаChauysha писал(а):cannot influence on
makes ... and helpsChauysha писал(а):doing sport just make you feel
in a good shape - устойчивоChauysha писал(а):to be at good shape
не хватает подлежащего, например we considerChauysha писал(а):Even if consider that training helps you
make yourself overcome ... and move...julioyn писал(а):have to make yourself to overcome
Глагол depend плохо смотрится в Present Continuousjulioyn писал(а):who are depending on each other.
I strongly believejulioyn писал(а):I am strongly believed
a personjulioyn писал(а):extreme sport person learns to control his fear.