Some people think that e-learning is a good alternative to attending classes

[marusya]

Полная тема эссе: Some people think that e-learning using the Internet is a good alternative to attending classes and lectures.

People have been studying since immemorial years. Today we still do it getting more and more information. There is a new way of getting education in modern society. It is e-learhing. Some people think that e-learning is convivient, but others disagree with them.

In my opinion, e-learning is a grateful alternative. First of all, number of people do not have a possibility to go at university every day and spent a lot of time there. For example, a woman who has children. Secondly, people do not need to sit in boring lectures. They may be at the computer in a comfortable chair and perform their tasks. Also it is a really good alternative because each person can relax at any moment.

On the other hand, some people believe that e-learning is not the best idea for getting education. They say that it cannot substitute a traditional form because a guality of this method is lower. Besides, they believe that contact with a teacher face to face is more effective.

I strongly disagree with these people because it is an incredible oppotunity to get education for busy people.

Despite other people's opinion I still believe that e-learning is a worth replacement to boring classes and lectures.

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[English Guru]

e-learhing

Орфография: e-learning

First of all, number of people

Артикль: Всегда a number of people

to go at university

Предлог: go to school, go to university

to go at university every day and spent

Грамматика: spend - инфинитив там

to sit in

Пожелание: sit through - просиживать

Also

Пожелание: moreover или furthermore

each person

Лексика: every person, each person - среди ограниченного чила людей

a guality of this method

Орфография и артикль: the quality of - потому что предлог of

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К1 (решение коммуникативной задачи): 2
К2 (организация текста): 2
К3 (лексика): 2
K4 (грамматика): 2
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ИТОГ: 9/14

Хорошая работа. Снизил немного за лексику и слабоватые аргументы. А как же выучиться на врача, на спортсмена, на синхронного переводчика при таком подходе? Раскрыты не все аспекты. Можно было еще подумать.

С другой стороны, вы - молодец, начинаете понимать, что от вас хотят: иногда лучше писать меньше и проще, но не делать ошибок. Подучите еще раз шаблонные слова и слова-связки: moreover, furthermore, nevertheless, consequently, on the contrary, eventually и др. и почаще их используйте.