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karina_mia писал(а):Furthermore, space flight, as a method of exploring space, can be dangerous because no one knows what challenges an astronaut will face as soon as he is out of Earth.
запятая перед sokarina_mia писал(а):problems so space explorations are rather useless.
high - technical invention - непонятно, перефразируйтеTory_96 писал(а):In today's world of high - technical invention
spend ... on - запомнитеTory_96 писал(а):spend a lot of money for research
research of our galaxy - родительный падеж требует предлога ofTory_96 писал(а):research our galaxy
expeditionsTory_96 писал(а):different expedition in space increase
Непонятно, или грамматика, или смысл. Возможно, there is a more significant problem ....Tory_96 писал(а):it is more significant problem
the exploration of spaceTory_96 писал(а):explorationing space
needs - единственное числоTory_96 писал(а):explorationing space is not a sphere which need
что это?Tory_96 писал(а):unexploration disease
1) similar problemsTory_96 писал(а):and alike global problem which should adressed.
money reported ???Tory_96 писал(а):If money reported to poor
Неправильная грамматика в условных предложениях.Tory_96 писал(а):If money reported to poor and ill people, we will make
набор словTory_96 писал(а):exploration space is available investments
humanity willTory_96 писал(а):humanitywill have unlimited abilites
opportunitiesTory_96 писал(а):People will have unlimited opportunite
understandTory_96 писал(а):if we make understant
shouldTory_96 писал(а):I shold
opinionsTory_96 писал(а):oppinio.
socialTory_96 писал(а):sociale
sociale problems are more impotant things than space researching.Tory_96 писал(а):a sociale problem more impotant things than space researching.
Обычно мы говорим there is no need to spendEduardDz писал(а):there is no need in spending
Запятая не нужна или объясните её постановкуEduardDz писал(а):of the universe, and claim to solve basic Earth problems.
Our planet, in my opinion, requiresEduardDz писал(а):Our planet in my opinion requires
не бывает таких болезней, подберите другое прилагательноеEduardDz писал(а):strong diseases
It is up to us to decideEduardDz писал(а):It is up us to decide
solution to (2 раза)IrinaLos писал(а):solution of the problem of unemployment
чаще economiesIrinaLos писал(а):the countries` economics
Запятая не нужнаIrinaLos писал(а):some people claim, the money that people spend on space programs
странный артикль theIrinaLos писал(а):the new sources of energy
a new place to liveIrinaLos писал(а):and new place to live
lacking in like lacking in moneyravenna писал(а):lacking of investment
generationsravenna писал(а):Some generation
as much money ... as possible - it не нуженravenna писал(а):as much money on universe exploration as it possible
on Earth - устойчивоkitten8978 писал(а):on the Earth
spent - пассивный инфинитивkitten8978 писал(а):can be entirelly spend
?? needs to be discussed ??kitten8978 писал(а):the concern is needee to discuss.
Запятая не нужнаkitten8978 писал(а):There are 2 groups of people, who maintain opposite attitudes.
invest inkitten8978 писал(а):to invest some movements or organisations,
believekitten8978 писал(а):I belive
these peoplekitten8978 писал(а):that the people are right
the number ofkitten8978 писал(а):but number of ecological problems
Запятая перед that не ставитсяkitten8978 писал(а):declared, that the Earth needs
kitten8978 писал(а):tha Space
spentkitten8978 писал(а):the most part of money should be spend
Thesekitten8978 писал(а):The people see
that spacekitten8978 писал(а):that the Space
to move tokitten8978 писал(а):they hope to remove to another planet,
странно звучит, лучше убрать use tokitten8978 писал(а):we will use to do the same
be assigned - повторите тему пассивный залогkitten8978 писал(а):should be asign evently
не понялkitten8978 писал(а):in prejudice of the Earth.
factoriesКристинаК писал(а):build any environmentally friendly fabrics.
Запятая не нужнаКристинаК писал(а):Despite of the fact, that more and more people
a great treasureКристинаК писал(а):people have great jewelry
избегайте сокращений = that is whyIvan the Great. писал(а):that’s why
contribution toIvan the Great. писал(а):the contribution of money in space
to continue exploringIvan the Great. писал(а):to continue to exploring
без артикляIvan the Great. писал(а):exploring the space
не ставьте запятую перед becauseIvan the Great. писал(а):space, because this is a very big and important
В задании артикль не ставят - и вы не ставьте!Ivan the Great. писал(а):to solve the problems on the earth
I can not disagree with itIvan the Great. писал(а):I can not to disagree with it
stop exploringIvan the Great. писал(а):we also cannot stop to explore the space.
Mars - имя собственное, между прочим! (без артикля)Ivan the Great. писал(а):of life on the Mars
грубая ошибка, правильно так: if people stopIvan the Great. писал(а):if people will stop
In conclusion,Ivan the Great. писал(а):In the conclusion,
andIvan the Great. писал(а):ad electricity