Сочинение на английском на тему "Куда пойти учиться: за границу или у себя в стране?"

[karina_mia]

By Ildar

Nowadays it is hard to become a successful person without a higher education and thus a dispute arises between people over where a student should study: abroad or in a native country. Let us figure it out!

As for me, I think Russia does not fall behind other countries in providing good universities, so it is the best option for Russian students to go into local universities. Furthermore, studying in a native country is easier in a sense that a person does not have to learn a foreign language or get used to a new environment. Finally, going abroad for a long term always means huge changes because one will have to get along well with the food, culture and climate, and no one knows if a person can go through these challenges.

On the other hand, some people claim that studying abroad has a lot of advantages. Firstly, a student can easily improve the language skills a country speaks in. Secondly, a long-term separation from a native country develops such character qualities as independence, confidence and courage because there are so many things a person has to cope with in a foreign country.

I cannot agree with these people. Learning a foreign language is indeed easier and faster in a native country, but how many dangerous situations a person can get involve in while in a foreign country. There is also a high risk of getting into trouble because a student cannot know everything about the country he or she studies in.

To sum up, I would say that getting a good education totally depends on a person. I believe if a student wants to be successful and happy, the native country is ready to give the best education and environment a person desperately needs.

[English Guru]

studying in a native country is easier in a sense that a person does not have to learn a foreign language

Cпорное утверждение, везде есть иностранный язык, как и философия.

one will have to get along well with the food

Лексика: get along = to have a friendly relationship, поэтому one will have to get used to the food, например.

a student can easily improve the language skills a country speaks in.

Предлог: speak English, но не speak in English

but how many dangerous situations a person can get involve in while in a foreign country.

Грамматика: get involved in ..... ?

[IrinaLos]

Education is a great part of people`s life. Good education helps to find well-paid job, to become successful in the future. Education abroad is very popular nowadays.

I think studying abroad helps to get better education. Firstly, unfortunately, Russian education is far from being the best. Russia is only on the 49th place in the ranking countries by education. For instance, there have not been Russian Nobel Prizers since the collapse of the Soviet Union. In my opinion it is significant.
Secondly, there are less real professionals, which can teach us in Russia. For example, we all have heard about brain drain. It is actual problem for Russia. A lot of talented and high-qualified Russian scientists and professors left their motherland for other countries, where they could have better working conditions.

On the other hand, some people claim that there are universities in Russia, which can give us good education.

It is true but such universities are in a very small number. Five-six good ones, I think. But there are a lot of people, who want to study there. So it is very hard to enter a good Russian university.

Despite other people`s opinion I am still convinced that studying abroad is much more productive. It is easier to achieve such education, there are more high-qualified scientists abroad – that is why more and more Russian people are deciding to study in the other countries.

[English Guru]

to find well-paid job,

a well-paid job - любое неабстрактное исчисляемое существительное в ед. ч. должно иметь артикль

on the 49th place

in the 49th place

In my opinion it is significant.

Запятая после in my opinion

there are less real professionals, which can teach us in Russia.

Не нужна запятая перед which

It is actual problem

an actual problem
Звучит плохо, уже обсуждали, замените на какое-нибудь шаблонное a controversial issue

countries, where they could have better working conditions.

Запятая не нужна

in Russia, which can give us good education.

Запятая не нужна

It is true but such universities are in a very small number.

Запятая нужна перед but

Five-six good ones, I think.

Five or six good ones...

But there are a lot of people,

Слабая связка, берите however,

a lot of people, who want to study

Запятая не нужна

So it is very hard

Слабая связка, берите consequently,

It is true but such universities are in a very small number. Five-six good ones, I think. But there are a lot of people, who want to study there. So it is very hard to enter a good Russian university.

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