Some people think that young people should follow in their parents' footsteps ... Эссе

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make a choice

в данном контексте the choice

a person should opts a kind of profession yourself.

если вставить правильную грамматику, то как-то так:
a person should opt for a kind of profession themselves.

he likes

he or she likes

people do a work which they like

do something they like

they achieve the success

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career choice affect their lives

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are developed difficulty

with difficulty

has right to shoose

the right to choose

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that choice of profession is a personal decision.

the choice

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[julioyn]

Nowadays there are a lot of opportunities to find a job. Some people believe that a person should follow the advice of his relatives or mates in the matter of choosing profession. Others have another opinion.

In my opinion, a person should choose a profession independently. Firstly, a man must count his personal interests and desires when he determines a future career. In this case, a person should not accept the vision even of the closest human beings. Moreover, if a person chooses the career he or she is fond of, the likelihood of becoming successful and independent is higher because this person will always know what to do and never leave things half done.

An opposite opinion is that friends and relatives are able to help one with profession selection. Close people observe man’s skills and talents. They also could influence on the person’s choice in a good way.

I cannot agree with this opinion. I strongly believe that despite the fact that relatives’ ability to find a person’s strong sides, only a man is responsible for his life and future. Nobody can decide one’s fate.

To sum up, there are various points of view on the problem of career choosing. Personally, I suggest that one has to be free when he or she makes an important decision in life.

[frosty_1]

Some people think that young people should follow in their parents' footsteps when choosing a profession.

Choosing a profession is an important part of our life. Everyone wants to be successful. Some people think it would be possible if teenagers follow in their parents' footsteps. Let us see all points of view.
In my opinion, a person should have more opportunities in choosing a profession. Firstly, children can have other talents and skills because they do not always take after their parents. So, they may like different subjects and hobbies. Secondly, teenagers cannot be good at the same sciences as their parents. It could be a reason of disappointment.
However, there are people who claim that caring parents will always give a helping hand. If a child has problems parents will give advice. Moreover, if a child has a similar job with mother or father, he or she will make a career faster having an example from his or her childhood.
I cannot agree with this point of view. We should not forget that parents are not always successful. Furthermore, they could try to realize their dreams in their children. Also, neither advice nor assistance is going to do you good if you feel under pressure.
To sum up, I strongly believe that when it comes to choosing a profession, one should listen to his or her heart. Loving parents will support their children anyway.