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[lejuliz]

Irkutsk
Russia
22/06/17
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter. I haven’t` answered you because I was busy with my school.
I think that the most interesting places in Moscow are Red Square and The State Tretyakov Gallery. There are a lot of cognitive historical facts about these places. You definitely should write about them. These sights very popular among foreign and local tourists because Red Square and The State Tretyakov Gallery are the main symbols of Moscow. The better season to visit Moscow is autumn because in this time not so cold and city`s nature looks really amazing.
Do you want go to the skating-rink? Do you think there will be crowed? Where is situated the skating-ring?
Sorry, I`ve got to go now. It`s time for my favorite TV show.
Write back soon.
Best wishes,
Julia

[English Guru]

for your letter

recent letter

haven’t`

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These sights very popular

are very popular

The better season

the best

Where is situated the skating-ring?

Where is the skating-ring situated?

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