People have been listening to music since time immemorial. Today we still want to get good music. The popularity of musical TV-channels and radio stations increases. Does music influence on us?
In my opinion, music has a certain effect on us. Music can relax a person or can destroy her or him. First of all, if a man listens to classical music or even prayerful music, he or she will feel more peaceful, happy and relaxing. Moreover, such music stimulates a brain to work more effectively. Secondly, if people listen to heavy music like rock, metal or rap, they will feel worse. In addition, they may have problems with health. Such music makes people to think about violence and death.
On the other hand, some people believe that music brings no influence to them. They say that music has only a good effect on them, even if this is hard rock.
I strongly disagree with this statement because many people claim on their bad feeling because of listening sad music. On the contrary, if a person feels badly, he or she always will turn on the radio to listen to music.
Despite other people`s opinion, I still believe that music influences on us. If people want to feel better and happier, doctors will recommend them to listen to good classical music.
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English Guru » 28.03.2014, 02:21
to the music обычноamerius писал(а):listening to music
influence - без предлога, influence usamerius писал(а):Does music influence on us?
что это за слово? Заниматься словотворчеством в ЕГЭ, к сожалению, не рекомендую!amerius писал(а):prayerful
relaxed; relaxing - расслабляющий, relaxed - расслабленныйamerius писал(а):peaceful, happy and relaxing
makes people think; make и let используем без to в активном залоге!amerius писал(а):makes people to think
винят своё плохое самочувствие? claim - без предлога!amerius писал(а):many people claim on their bad feeling
listening to sad musicamerius писал(а):because of listening sad music
feels bad - после глаголов ощущения используем прилагательные, а не наречия!amerius писал(а):feels badly
will always turn - наречие всегда стоит после вспомогательного глагола, но перед смысловымamerius писал(а):he or she always will turn
listen to the musicamerius писал(а):turn on the radio to listen to music
influence без предлога (когда глагол)amerius писал(а):that music influences on us
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karina_mia » 01.04.2014, 11:42
Тема сочинения: "Certain types of music have a particular effect on us, regardless of whether we like them or not. Some music helps us feel peaceful, whereas other types promote hate and violence."
By Ildar
Music has always been a vital part of our culture and thus our lives would be very different without it. However, how exactly does music affect people? Is it capable of making us more happy, sad or cheerful?
In my opinion, music is very influential in our world. To begin with, the main purpose of music is to help us release a whole range of emotions such as happiness, excitement or recentment. Furthermore, music therapy is well-known for its ability to cure different diseases affecting our brain cells. Finally, people who play different instruments are smarter and have a greater intelligence that those who lack the ability to do this kind of thing.
On the other hand, some people claim that there are certain types of music like rock or rap which have a bad influence on people’s health. In their mind, rock and rap songs incite violence and hatred and thus are not considered to be a real music.
I cannot agree with these people. There are famous rockers like Kurt Cobain or Elton John, whose songs have become very popular around the world, and no one considers their songs to be violent or dangerous.
To sum up, I would say that music influences people in countless ways. It can help express our thoughts, feelings, love or anger. What kind of music a person listens to says a lot about his or her personality, preferences, the way he or she see the world.
By Ildar
Music has always been a vital part of our culture and thus our lives would be very different without it. However, how exactly does music affect people? Is it capable of making us more happy, sad or cheerful?
In my opinion, music is very influential in our world. To begin with, the main purpose of music is to help us release a whole range of emotions such as happiness, excitement or recentment. Furthermore, music therapy is well-known for its ability to cure different diseases affecting our brain cells. Finally, people who play different instruments are smarter and have a greater intelligence that those who lack the ability to do this kind of thing.
On the other hand, some people claim that there are certain types of music like rock or rap which have a bad influence on people’s health. In their mind, rock and rap songs incite violence and hatred and thus are not considered to be a real music.
I cannot agree with these people. There are famous rockers like Kurt Cobain or Elton John, whose songs have become very popular around the world, and no one considers their songs to be violent or dangerous.
To sum up, I would say that music influences people in countless ways. It can help express our thoughts, feelings, love or anger. What kind of music a person listens to says a lot about his or her personality, preferences, the way he or she see the world.
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English Guru » 05.04.2014, 14:53
resentmentkarina_mia писал(а):recentment
intelligence - неисчисляемое, поэтому артикль не нуженkarina_mia писал(а):and have a greater intelligence
http://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/intelligence
music - неисчисляемое, поэтому артикль не нуженkarina_mia писал(а):are not considered to be a real music
Спорное утверждение...karina_mia писал(а):I cannot agree with these people. There are famous rockers like Kurt Cobain or Elton John, whose songs have become very popular around the world, and no one considers their songs to be violent or dangerous.
В конце смазалиkarina_mia писал(а):the way he or she see the world.
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