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**nastyakabaeva** » 27.03.2014, 14:16

Many people think, that parents should encourage their children in order to study very well, but others do not agree and consider, that a child should be responsible for studies himself without pocket money. Let us start by considering pros and cons of extra pocket money for children.

In my opinion, each child begins to whine, that do not want to go to school. And parents should motivate a child for learning. Extra pocket money is a good idea for it.

Firstly, a child will feel parents’ trust and he will become more independent. So, a child knows, that having own money, he may buy anything.

Secondly, a child will comply with the rule. A good mark is good money. He will understand if he tries to study very well, pocket money will be given. So, a child will change attitude to learning. Children will possess qualities such as industrious, seriousness, responsibility and so on.

Finally, a person, who deals with money constantly, gets new skills. For example, a child learns to keep money for more important purchase, than cakes in a school canteen.

On the other hand, if parents abuse giving money, a child may become greedy and he will ask for money constantly.

However, if parents distribute the family budget correctly and explain to the child, that he has grown, problems can be avoided.

To sum up, I still believe in fact that children will learn better and become independent, if parents motivate them.

**English Guru** » 29.03.2014, 02:12

nastyakabaeva писал(а):parents should encourage their children in order to study very well

не та связка, требуется so that: parents should encourage their children so that they study very well
Подробнее: http://englishgu.ru/soyuz-chtoby-v-angliyskom-yazyike-perevod/

nastyakabaeva писал(а):consider, that a child

nastyakabaeva писал(а):to whine, that

nastyakabaeva писал(а):a child knows, that having

запятую перед that не ставим, эссе стараемся ПЕРЕЧИТЫВАТЬ, перед тем как сдавать с целью выявления мелких ошибок! :rambo:

nastyakabaeva писал(а):each child begins to whine, that do not want to go to school.

1) each - когда мы говорим об ограниченном числе чего-то, в данном случаю лучше every child
2) во второй части предложения после that пропало ПОДЛЕЖАЩЕЕ, исправим например так: that they do not want to go to school

nastyakabaeva писал(а):and he

nastyakabaeva писал(а):he may buy

nastyakabaeva писал(а):He will understand if he tries

nastyakabaeva писал(а):a child may become greedy and he will ask

nastyakabaeva писал(а):explain to the child, that he has grown

мы уже написали много сочинений и больше не допускаем таких оплошностей, нужно писать: he or she

nastyakabaeva писал(а):having own money

обычно having their own money

nastyakabaeva писал(а):possess qualities such as industrious, seriousness, responsibility and so on.

прилагательное в одном ряду с существительными = некрасиво

nastyakabaeva писал(а):a person, who deals

запятую перед who не ставим

nastyakabaeva писал(а):a person, who deals with money constantly, gets

explain to the child, that he has grown, problems
придаточные предложения не обособляются

nastyakabaeva писал(а):for more important purchase, than cakes in a

нет тут запятой... :mad:

nastyakabaeva писал(а):I still believe in fact that

I still believe that или I still believe in the fact that

nastyakabaeva писал(а):independent, if

запятой нет, повторите тему: http://englishgu.ru/zapjatye-v-anglijskom/ (Запятые в условных предложениях)

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nastyakabaeva, уже пора учиться на своих ошибках! Не допускайте повторяющихся однотипных ошибок!

**nastyakabaeva** » 30.03.2014, 01:22

Почему вы сняли балл за решение коммуникативной задачи?

Добавлено спустя 3 минуты 5 секунд:
И что не так с организацией текста?

**nastyakabaeva** » 31.03.2014, 00:59

I never make the same mistake twice.
I make it five or six times, just to be sure.

Мне кажется в тему)) Как раз моя проблема с запятыми :razz:

**English Guru** » 01.04.2014, 11:48

nastyakabaeva писал(а):Почему вы сняли балл за решение коммуникативной задачи?

Цитирую с методички для проверки эссе: "имеются отдельные нарушения стилевого оформления речи", а именно Вы пишите he вместо he or she или people / everybody ...

nastyakabaeva писал(а):И что не так с организацией текста?

Цитата: "имеются отдельные недостатки при использовании средств лексической связи", а именно связка so that не была использована.

nastyakabaeva писал(а):I never make the same mistake twice.
I make it five or six times, just to be sure.

Да уж, точно! Мне тоже нравится эта картинка!

**karina_mia** » 01.04.2014, 11:50

Many parents encourage their children to study well by giving extra pocket money for each good mark.
By Ildar

Nowadays a lot of parents motivate their kids to do well in school by giving some money. However, others believe that teenagers should work hard to get good grades without any rewards.

In my opinion, there is nothing wrong with encouraging children to study well by giving extra money. To begin with, teenagers will grow up responsible and independent if they get some money for good marks. Furthermore, youngsters will better understand the phrase “Money does not grow on trees” and that money should be earned through hard work and persistence. Finally, children’s knowledge will be deeper and broader because money is a great motivator to do well in studies.

On the other hand, some people are afraid of the fact that kids might get obsessed with the idea of getting extra money for each good mark. In their mind, rewarding children for grades is a bad idea because teenagers are very impressionable and thus they can become addicted to money which is not a good thing.

I cannot agree with these people. The sooner a child will learn how to deal with money, the easier it will be to become a successful person in a further life. Children should get used to money from an early age because practically everything revolves around money in today's world.

To sum up, I would say that parents should always motivate their children to work hard in school, and giving money for good marks is one of the most effective encouragements.

**English Guru** » 06.04.2014, 02:54

Ildar писал(а):The sooner a child will learn how to deal with money, the easier it will be to become a successful person in a further life.

Постановка времен в предложениях с таким оборотом похожа на ту, которую мы используем в придаточных предложениях времени и условия. Future Simple может употребляться только во втором придаточном.

The sooner a child learns how to deal with money, the easier it will be to become a successful person in a further life.
http://www.grammar-quizzes.com/themore.html

karina_mia писал(а):to work hard in school

Да можно сказать to work hard in school, но обычно говорят at school

Отличное эссе, разнообразная лексика. Надеюсь, читатели форума тоже оценят его по достоинству, ведь по вашим эссе они могут учиться!

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