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The Internet is a new way to communicate

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Сообщение Jimmy_Kane » 27.04.2014, 21:34

The Internet is a new way to communicate. Some people think it has more drawbacks than advantages.
A few years ago people could not imagine how the Internet may change our life. Nowadays the Internet has become inseparable part of life, one of those essential things that we use every day. It is difficult to imagine our future without easy access to information or social networks. In my opinion, the Internet has more advantages than disadvantages.

First of all, the Internet can do and find almost everything. Reading books, listening to music, watching films, playing games, chatting with friends, finding information, learning online and many other things can be done in the Internet.

On the other hand, the Internet has so many things that distract attention from the necessary activities and people spend a lot of time to find requisite information. In addition to this, in the Internet there are many harmful viruses, which can break operation system. They might delete much of data and it will be difficult and expensive to restore. On different forums children can face with aggressive people and find prohibited information.

However, the Internet lets people to connect with each other all around the world. It helps people to quickly communicate with distant relatives and friends, also it helps to find new friends from any continent. Many useful services where you can find out the weather, news and TV programme are accessible within several seconds. Moreover, people can buy clothes online without leaving home, that helps not to spend a lot of time on shopping.

All in all, people always will be arguing about pluses and minuses of the Internet. Quick access to any kinds of information lets people save the time, because we can find everything in one place. The Internet is a great thing created by mankind, which has taken a great step in the future existence of the world.
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Сообщение English Guru » 30.04.2014, 00:55

Jimmy_Kane писал(а):A few years ago people could not imagine how the Internet may change our life.
По правилу согласования времён нужно здесь использовать might, а не may

Jimmy_Kane писал(а):has become inseparable part
an inseparable part

Jimmy_Kane писал(а):First of all, the Internet can do and find almost everything.
Интернет может делать и искать?

Jimmy_Kane писал(а):spend a lot of time to find
finding

Jimmy_Kane писал(а):requisite information
:weirdface: the required information

Jimmy_Kane писал(а):there are many harmful viruses, which can break operation system.
Запятая перед which не нужна.

Jimmy_Kane писал(а):the Internet lets people to connect
lets people connect - to не ставим

Jimmy_Kane писал(а):lets people save the time, because we can find
Запятая перед because не нужна.

Jimmy_Kane писал(а):a great thing created by mankind, which has taken a great step
Запятая перед which не нужна.

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