Утверждение видела в интернете и не переписала, но там была проблемная ситуация: где лучше жить, в деревне или в городе.
Many people are in favour of idea that living in the town is not better than in the country. However, other people are convinced that living in the country has some disadventages.
I would like to explain my point of view on this situation. I think that living in the country is less convinient. There are many things to be said in favour of this idea. First of all, if you live in the town, you can easily get to any place. It does not take much time to get to school or work. Secondly, if you live in the town, you have a varity places to visit, such as cinemas, theatres, museums, parks, zoos and cafes.
On the other hand, some people claim that living in the town is not better than in the country. They believe that town is noisy and dangerous place because of people always run around and cars drive so quickly. Moreover, they say that if you live in the town, you will not have enough rest. You will live in hustle and bustle. I disagree with this point of view, because living in a city gives you more chances and possibilities for successful life.
Taking everything into account, I can say that everybody chooses where he/she wants to live, and I think it is very questionable situation.
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