Reading books isn't so popular in nowadays

[Elena]

Nowadays some people affirm that the century of books is finishing and their film versions can absolutely replace them. The others maintain the idea that the role of books is still significant.
In my opinion, the importance of books has always been high. Firstly, it is true that a film version of a book represents only its interpretation. What is more, directors often change facts and add something they think is needed. So, a person might be given a completely wrong idea of the book. Secondly, it has been asserted that individuals, who spend their free time reading a book, have a better memory and imagination, are more creative and even intelligent, which is why reading is extremely important.
On the contrary, the certain humans reckon that reading a book is a waste of time, as it requires much more time than watching its film version. Furthermore, some of them claim that a ticket to the cinema is way cheaper.
I cannot agree with these statements. To start with, reading a book let people to move into another universe with its rules, traditions and various heroes. Also, in the today’s world there are a lot of libraries providing with free books.
In conclusion, I would like to emphasize that reading books is truly necessary, as it develops our intellectual faculties, makes our life less stressful. Fortunately, there is a great number of people that understand the significance of books.

[English Guru]

individuals, who spend their free time reading a book, have

Придаточное предложение с who не выделяется запятыми.

reading a book is a waste of time, as it requires much more time

не нужна запятая

reading a book let people to move

Сразу две ошибки: окончание -s, и убрать to
reading a book lets people move

its rules, traditions and various heroes.

rules, traditions, and various heroes - требуется запятая перед and при перечислении.

in the today’s world

in today’s world - устойчиво без артикля

a lot of libraries providing with free books.

Нарушение лексического шаблона: provide somebody with something - не хватает дополнения (объекта).
http://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/provide

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-1 балл за лексику

ИТОГ: 12/14 - хорошее эссе, разнообразная лексика

[Elena]

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