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plants, fabric - материалgohawks писал(а):and fabrics
gohawks писал(а):can't
cannot - в эссе нельзя сокращатьgohawks писал(а):I'd
unemployedgohawks писал(а):jobless people
excuse for - http://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/excuse_2gohawks писал(а):can be an excuse of a
артикль the необязательноgohawks писал(а):is a system of the connected organisms
Запятые и сокращение. That is why, despite the growth of cities, we - так как это вводные конструкцииgohawks писал(а):That's why despite the growth of cities we
запятая не нужнаIrinaLos писал(а):power plants, which use coal.
Environmentally friendly = environment-friendly = eco-friendly = nature-friendlyIrinaLos писал(а):environmental friendly.
Ильмира писал(а):the growth of cities
Учитесь перефразировать, почитайте другие эссе, расположенные в этой теме.Ильмира писал(а):In my opinion, the growth of cities
I am referring various ecological situations in particular.olya98 писал(а):articularly it refers to ecological situation in cities.
controversialolya98 писал(а):Let us discuss this controversal question.
Like myself, people are given many opportunities because of the rapid process of urbanization.olya98 писал(а):As for me, people have got many opportunities because of the rapid process of urbanization.
Firstolya98 писал(а):Firstly, there are more job vacancies in big cities.
Second, the majority of universities are situated in big cities.olya98 писал(а):Secondly, the majority of universities is situated in cities.
Last, cities provide many fun ways that people can spend their weekends.olya98 писал(а):At last, city proposes many ways to spend weekends with fun.
On the other hand, trees and plants are rapidly declining in cities.olya98 писал(а):On tne other hand, we will not see any plants in the countryside.
City dwellers have gained much appreciation for things such as clean air, thick grass and a clear sky. This is abundant in the country.olya98 писал(а):That is why city dwellers especially appreciate in countries such things as clean air, thick grass and clear sky.
As a result, citizens acquire breathing problems and various pulmonary diseases.olya98 писал(а):As a result, citizens earn dangerous diseases connecting with the breathing system.
reducing plant and animal populations because their homes are being destroyed.olya98 писал(а):They cut down trees, reduce populations of animals and plants because their home is constantly destroying.
I am still sure that man will not do without cities.olya98 писал(а):But still I am sure that mankind will not do without cities
Big towns help us gain technological progress, enabling us to have more comfortable lives.olya98 писал(а):Big towns help us to lead the technological progress and so make our life more comfortable.
expenseolya98 писал(а):However, I agree that we cannot live at the expence of nature.
olya98 писал(а):Except building cities people should take care of creating waste-free technologies and keeping natural resources.