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Сообщение Muarina » 30.11.2014, 14:47

There is no doubt, that people tend to find someone for sharing their feelings and be supported, since it is quite difficult to live alone in our violent modern society. Therefore, the problems of friendships is highly important and what is more easier: making friends or keeping them is widely discussed.

I strongly support the idea, that making friends not so difficult as keeping them. To begin with, every treatments between people require responsibility from both of them. They have to accept their friend with own treats and disadvantages and aways try to pay attention to their problems and compassionate. Furthermore, it cannot be denied, that real relationship's source is the trust. As a result, friends ought to avoid telling lies.

Nevertheless, there are plenty of people claiming, that meeting up is more tough deal. Their main reason is that they do not wonder how to communicate with others.

In spite of this, I cannot fully agree with them, as I strongly believe that making friends is limited by smiling and chatting, in case to impress each other. Everyone has something in common with people, thus the same interests can be a good issue for conversation.

In conclusion, the issue under consideration is appears to be rather controversial. However, i still believe that keeping friends is hard work while you have opportunity to present your fondness to other people and study how to accept them. Anyway, everyone has the right to make their own choice.
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Сообщение English Guru » 04.12.2014, 03:57

245 слов. Осторожно, не приближайтесь к максимальному порогу, который составляет 250 слов.
Аргументы ЗА (второй абзац) выполнены по принципу "от противного"...Ну не знаю, на какого проверяющего нарвётесь...
КОНТРАРГУМЕНТ (третий абзац) слабый. Почему другие считают, что поддерживать дружбу проще? Вы пишите "потому что они не интересуются как общаться с другими" ???

Muarina писал(а):There is no doubt, that
Muarina писал(а):I strongly support the idea, that
Muarina писал(а):cannot be denied, that
Muarina писал(а):there are plenty of people claiming, that
Запятую перед that не ставим

Muarina писал(а):the problems of friendships is highly important
are highly important

Muarina писал(а):more easier
more easier избыточно и неправильно. Просто easier

Muarina писал(а):making friends not so difficult as keeping them
is not so difficult

Muarina писал(а):every treatments between people
Я лично не понял. Ставлю лексическую ошибку.

Muarina писал(а):every treatments between people require responsibility from both of them.
both of them - двое людей? МБ from the both sides?

Muarina писал(а):accept their friend with own treats
their own treats... Что за treats? Угощения? Или всё-таки treats of character?

Muarina писал(а):real relationship's source
Сокращать of-фразы не всегда хорошо. The source of a real relationship is ...

Muarina писал(а):meeting up is more tough deal
a tougher deal

Muarina писал(а):In spite of this, I cannot fully agree
Не нужна запятая

Muarina писал(а):I cannot fully agree with them, as
Не нужна запятая в значении причины

Muarina писал(а):is limited by
limited to

Muarina писал(а):is limited by smiling and chatting, in case to impress each other
Не совсем понял "in case to impress each other" В случае, чтобы...?

Muarina писал(а):is appears to be rather
is - просто лишнее слово, но считается за грамматическую ошибку.

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Сообщение IrinaLos » 05.02.2015, 17:13

Friendship Is one of the greatest parts of the people`s relationships. But how to make a new friend? How to save your friendship? And what is easier: to make a friend or to keep friendship with one? Some people find the second more difficult. I disagree with them.
True friendship is very hard to reach. It requires a lot of things. Firstly, all of us are different. We have different opinion about everything, different ways of life. It is not easy to find someone who will understand you at all.Secondly, even if you find somebody to be friend you will need long time to feel that this person is really your friend. Friendship does not appear at a moment.
On the other hand some people claim that it is easy to lose your friend. They say that it is hard to avoid quarrels, to solve all problems in relationships and to save your friendship for years.
It makes sense, but in my opinion, if friendship is really true, it will not be ruined by anything.
Despite other people`s opinion, I am still convinced it is more difficult to find friends than to save a friendship.If your friend understands you, if you trust him or her and your friendship is tested by time, nothing will sunder you.
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Сообщение English Guru » 10.02.2015, 01:51

IrinaLos писал(а):We have different opinion
opinions или поставьте артикль

IrinaLos писал(а):need long time
a long time

IrinaLos писал(а):Friendship does not appear at a moment.
at once

IrinaLos писал(а):On the other hand
запятая

Количество ошибок не превышает максимально допустимое для максимального балла. Эссе средненькое, стандартное)))

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Сообщение tanya g.l » 04.03.2015, 22:10

Friendship is the most important thing in our lives. We all need a friend to be there for us. It is pretty hard to make friends. What is easier:to make friends or to keep them?
In my opinion, you have to do more efforts to keep friends. You cannot think only about yourself and expect that you will become the center of the universe for your friend. Being in friendship with someone means caring about others' interests and feelings. I believe everyone has problems and unhappy moments in life. You should never turn your back on friends when they are in trouble. If there is no opportunity to help, you just ought to be with your friend and give them moral support. Unfortunately, sometimes people do not understand that.
However, making friends can be problematic. Some people are shy even to say "hello". It is almost impossible for them to start communicating with someone. Besides, you give information about yourself, tell about your emotions and thoughts when you start being friend with a person. We all afraid to be pushed away. We do not like when others make fun of us.
I cannot agree that keeping friends is easier. We want to have true friends. That is why we must learn to be kind, faithful, and honest. To tell the truth, it can be hard sometimes.
In conclusion, I would like to say we should do our best to keep friends. Everyone should appreciate having true friends.
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Сообщение English Guru » 11.03.2015, 01:09

tanya g.l писал(а):you have to do more efforts to keep friends.
make efforts

tanya g.l писал(а):to be with your friend and give them moral support.
единственное число смешали с множественным

tanya g.l писал(а):you start being friend with
being friends with

tanya g.l писал(а):We all afraid
we are all afraid; afraid - прилагательное

tanya g.l писал(а):We do not like when others
Запомните устойчивый оборот: We do not like it when others

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Сообщение tanya g.l » 11.03.2015, 10:14

Cпасибо большое за проверку!
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Сообщение Настя » 16.03.2015, 18:04

People have been living in community and trying to make friendly relationships with each other since time immemorial. Today we still want to have good friends and we all understand that it is a kind of hard job to support those contacts, but not everybody share this opinion.
From my point of view, I cannot see a problem to make a friend, but it seems to be very difficult to keep it. Firstly, we always make friendly relations without any problems. It is enough to be kindly and funny with someone if you want to enter into this kind of relationships. However, with the time, you find out more and more about your friend and, of course, it may be something unpleasant and consequently you must submit to his or her imperfection. Secondly, being a friend means that you must always support your comrade. If we are talking about happiness, it seems to be very easy, but our life includes a grief too and so real friend should be near his or her comrade in all situations.
On the other hand, some people believe, that being the friend is only an amusement. They think that friendship does not mean responsibility and there is no problem to keep friends during the whole life.
I strongly disagree with this opinion because there are many examples when people become disappointed in friendship in case of misunderstanding, betrayal and lie.
Despite other people’s opinions, I still believe that if you want to keep the friend you have to make efforts.
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Сообщение English Guru » 25.03.2015, 13:29

Настя писал(а):it is a kind of hard job
Разговорный стиль

Настя писал(а):not everybody share this
shares

Настя писал(а):to make a friend, but it seems to be very difficult to keep it.
друг это it?

Настя писал(а):Firstly, we always make friendly relations without any problems.
Крайне субъективное утверждение, нужно стараться писать непредвзято

Настя писал(а):with the time, you find out more and more about
Запятая не нужна

Настя писал(а):you must submit to his or her imperfection.
Подчиниться их несовершенству?
Во-вторых, поработайте над модальностью - в эссе слишком много must, слишком много мы чего-то кому-то должны

Настя писал(а):However, with the time, you find out more and more about your friend and, of course, it may be something unpleasant and consequently you must submit to his or her imperfection. Secondly, being a friend means that you must always support your comrade. If we are talking about happiness, it seems to be very easy, but our life includes a grief too and so real friend should be near his or her comrade in all situations.
Зачем этот опус во втором абзаце? Какая цель? Свою мысль, что заводить друзей легко, вы доказали очень слабо.

Настя писал(а):They think that friendship does not mean responsibility and there is no problem to keep friends during the whole life.
Контраргумент не развёрнут.

Настя писал(а):Despite other people’s opinions, I still believe that if you want to keep the friend you have to make efforts.
Так и не понял вашего мнения: легче заводить друзей или сохранять дружбу? Нужно выбрать одну точку зрения (ту, которую вы пишите во втором абзаце).

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Сообщение ДейДей » 29.08.2015, 14:26

Friendship is relationship between people, built on trust. Find a good friends is difficult because friends must helping each other in different situations. So the questions arises: it's easier to make friends than to keep them? Let's discuss this problem.
I think that to keep friends is easier. I support this idea because with your friends you pass through the misery and through a smile and throw his comrades because of quarrels is wrong. If these people are important to you, you will always go to compromise with them. To apologize and find a common solution to problem easily.
Some people think differently. They confident that to make friends is easier because they believe that to avoid quarrels and put up is hard. I don't agree with them, there are people who find it difficult to meet new people. To find new friends takes time and lots of efforts. There is a saying: "One old friend is better than a hundred new ones".
To seem up, I'd like to emphasize that true friendship does not destroy any quarrel. Keep friends is not easy but also correct because if you value friendship, you will always find a way to save it.
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Сообщение English Guru » 31.08.2015, 11:13

ДейДей писал(а):a good friends
ошибка - использование неопределенного артикля с существительным во множественном числе

ДейДей писал(а):must helping
после must - инфинитив

ДейДей писал(а):it's easier to make friends than to keep them?
Порядок слов прямой, зачем тогда в конце знак вопроса? По логике должно быть is it ...

ДейДей писал(а):Let's
Старайтесь не сокращать слова в эссе. Let us

ДейДей писал(а):and through a smile and throw his comrades because of quarrels is wrong.
тут что-то с лексикой и смыслом, требуется перефразировать. Because в данном случае без of

ДейДей писал(а):go to compromise
калька с русского языка; такие обороты нужно смотреть в англо-английском словаре (longman dictionary online) и запоминать.

ДейДей писал(а):They confident
They are confident

ДейДей писал(а):To find new friends takes time
It takes tome to find...

ДейДей писал(а):and lots of efforts.
effort обычно неисчисляемое

ДейДей писал(а):Keep friends is not easy
Keeping - герундий в качестве существительного

Извините, сейчас не так много времени оценить подробно. В от примерная оценка:
- 2 балла за грамматику
- 2 балла за лексику

ДейДей писал(а):Some people think differently. They confident that to make friends is easier because they believe that to avoid quarrels and put up is hard. I don't agree with them, there are people who find it difficult to meet new people. To find new friends takes time and lots of efforts. There is a saying: "One old friend is better than a hundred new ones".

Данный абзац необходимо разделить на два (смотрите структуру эссе) http://forum.englishgu.ru/viewtopic.php?f=17&t=433 и увеличить количество аргументов до двух.

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Сообщение ДейДей » 31.08.2015, 12:13

Спасибо вам большое, всё учту)
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Сообщение Luckiest9 » 18.09.2015, 16:03

There is no doubt that we can strive to search friends for impart their minds and emotions. Some people claim that making friends easier than keeping them. But not all agree with the statement. They suppose that keeping friends require less efforts.

I agree with the point of view that keeping friends harder than search them. To begin with, every action between people can demand consideration from the both sides and mutual help. Secondly, friends need to understand each other. Friends should hear each other and give advice. Then we can say that true friends do not lie each other.

Nevertheless, some people have another point of view. They suppose that there is nothing harder than making friends. Firstly, these people never consider keeping them is something important. Then they think that need a lot of time for constructing a new friendship. In addition, they do not believe that way to strong friendship may be hard. But later they understand the difficulties of constructing friendship.

Despite this fact I respect, I hardly agree with these people because friendship will not survive with no mutual help. When you friends with somebody, psychological support is needed. Strives builds a great friendship . It is going to be obvious when you are talking with friend and learning his inner world.

To cut a long story short, your choice influence your future contacts in the society. Either make efforts to friendship or not is your own wish.
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Its easier to make friends than to keep them

Сообщение Uamster » 21.10.2016, 15:57

Nowadays we have many friends, but we can not say what they our really friends.And that is why many people think that it is easier to make friends than to keep them.
In my opinion real friend is rare thing and we have to treashure and appreciate real and true friends.Firstly, a good friend is someone who understands you and allways helps you in difficult time. Secondly,the real friend is never going to leave you.And that is why I think we can find many new friends but only one can be our real friend.
However, some people have another opinion.They consider that in our world where everything is changing all the time it is easiar to make new friend than to keep your real friends.
As for me,I cannot agree with their idea.Because I am sure that real friends never leave you and the good friendship between you and your childhood friends can not destroyed.
To sum up, there are different points of view on this problem.But I believe that it is not difficult to keep friendship whith real friend.
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