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Gr - артикль не нуженChristina писал(а):The classical literature
Gr - нужен артикль aChristina писал(а):different attitude
Sp - studyingChristina писал(а):studing
Gr - makes us better equippedChristina писал(а):more better equipped
P - Не нужна запятая: http://iconlogic.blogs.com/weblog/2012/03/writing ... a-comma-go-after-although.htmlChristina писал(а):Although, modern literature makes
Coh - напрашивается связка both ... andChristina писал(а):he should read classical and modern literature
Старайтесь писать 3 аргумента.Christina писал(а):In my opinion, schoolboys and schoolgirls do not study enough modern authors for several reasons.First and foremost, it is a lack of time to learn it because a school program is difficult nowadays.Secondly, some books of modern literature are useless as they have not got any common sense.
Log. Ну так вы уж определитесь!!! Я так и не понял, вы согласны, что в школах изучают недостаточно современной литературы?! Излагайте свои мысли чётко. Тут вы ходите по лезвию бритвы, так как вы толком не опровергли контраргумент. Некоторые преподаватели вполне могут поставить 0 за решение коммуникативной задачи и за всё эссе.Christina писал(а):It seems to me that is not right. Although, modern literature makes us more better equipped to deal with different situations which may arise in our today's life,but classical literature teaches us more than modern.
Сразу много ошибок в одном предложении: There is a marvellous number of different kinds of books. - да и вообще предложение не очень...Михаил писал(а):There are marvelous number of different kinds.
Запятая перед I wonderМихаил писал(а):Who is right I wonder?
Запятая после вводной конструкции in my opinionМихаил писал(а):In my opinion pupils
странный аргумент....Михаил писал(а):Thirdly,the literature of "old time" is more convenient for modern generation.
it can helpМихаил писал(а):it can helps
Нет запятойМихаил писал(а):I'm sure, that
Так каково ВАШЕ МНЕНИЕ? Не переключайтесь на другую тему! Вы пишите только про modern literature и должны выражать мнение по поводу неё!Михаил писал(а):It seems to me that it isn't right. I'm sure, that only classical literature makes us more equipped to deal with different situations which may arise in our today's life.
Михаил писал(а):isn't
Не сокращайте слова! Это не письмо другу!Михаил писал(а):don't
youngsters to develop a sincere love for readingEkaterinam писал(а):Secondly, modern literature can help youngsters to develop sincere love for reading
Also, they feel that it is difficult for writers to invent something new.Ekaterinam писал(а):Also, they consider that it is difficult for writers to invent something new.
Ekaterinam писал(а):Nevertheless, I still believe that there is future for literature and in order not to miss it we ought to read modern authors and study their work.
rather online than in booksKristina писал(а):to find all needed information on the online recourses than in books.
booksKristina писал(а):school students still have to read book
whether так не употребляется. тут уместна связка regardless of the fact that ИЛИ no matter what ...Kristina писал(а):still have to read book whether they are written by a classical writer or modern.
А вот тут many people argue whether people should learn...Kristina писал(а):many people argue about should people learn modern
replace... with modernKristina писал(а):should not replace classical literature by modern
developKristina писал(а):decelop
givesKristina писал(а):classical literature give us food
these worksKristina писал(а):plots of this works
are connectedKristina писал(а):the problems which connected with
a modern lifestyleKristina писал(а):modern lifestyle.
a needKristina писал(а):so there is in need
modern authors / modern onesKristina писал(а):to include modern
Требуется запятая послеKristina писал(а):To sum up
Если view в значении opinion, то view onDanil.K. писал(а):Let us consider some views of this issue.
...or literatureDanil.K. писал(а):we do not pay attention to modern authors and literature at school at all.
is related toDanil.K. писал(а):the amount of them are related with our daily social problems.
anDanil.K. писал(а):there is a opposite opinion.
Неправильно употребляете on the one hand, on the other handDanil.K. писал(а):On the one hand, some people are sure that a modern literature do not provide any benefits for students at all. On the other hand, people tend to think there is only classic literature providing students the real point of worldview.
артикль не нуженDanil.K. писал(а):to focus students' attention on a classic literature
oneDanil.K. писал(а):a modern once