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Circus shows are popular among young and old, men, women, and children. Who does not enjoy watching a circus show? Is circus the best entertainment? Should parent take children to the circus?
In my opinion, circus shows can be exciting and thrilling. Children live colourful, shining clothes and fireworks. I believe funny clowns and animals make children smile and laugh. Getting good emotions can make them feel happier. Besides, going to the circus is a good way to spend time with family. Parents are able to find out more about their child's interests. Children share their emotions and thoughts with parents easier. Their relationship can become better.
However, many people say that parents should not take children to the circus. Animals are used for entertainment in circuses. They can experience suffering and cruelty while training for the show. Children also might get used to see animals as objects that do not feel pain. That is why going to the circus is a bad way to learn about animals.
I cannot agree with this statement. There are many organizations that protect animal rights. For example, PETA works on variety of issues, including animal abuse. What is more, the amount of animal-free circuses has increased.
In conclusion, I would like to say that the circus is a good entertainment for children,but parents should explain that people must not treat animals badly.