Some people think that to get a good education one should go abroad.

[EduardDz]

Some people think that to get a good education one should go abroad.

Education has become an important part of our lives. More and more people want to study abroad. They suppose that education there is much better.

In my opinion, there are lots of good universities in Russia. Thousands of geniuses were brought up in our country. Firstly, studying abroad requires mental readiness and self-confidence. It is very hard to live out of habitual conditions. Students should be ready to cook food, clean the room and sail through all the hardships without any help. Secondly, abroad programs are rather expensive. Sometimes year abroad can be equaled to five years in Russia. In addition, I have not mentioned anything about unordinary and even too liberal process of studying. Students are allowed to eat in the lecture halls, put their legs on the desk or simply draw on the tables. That is obviously a con.

Nevertheless, some people do believe in international education and claim that there are no good universities in Russia. They say that Russian education chases only for the diploma, but not for the knowledge.

I can’t agree with this statement. There are excellent institutes and academies. For example, MSU, HSE or MGIMO. It is rather hard to enter them, but programs are splendid.

To sum up, I think that we should be independent and not follow the mob. Choose the university you love and start educational process
Some people think that to get a good education one should go abroad.

[English Guru]

EduardDz, снова артикли)) Любое исчисляемое неабстрактное существительное должно иметь артикль.

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I have not mentioned anything about unordinary and even too liberal process of studying.

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[sumerrella]

It is common knowledge that a lot of people consider that a person can get a proper education only abroad. Others state that it's unnecessary.
As for me, I strongly disagree with this statement for many reasons.
Firstly it's very hard to study abroad because it requires a high level of the foreign language. In addition, it needs a full independence of a student and can be very stressful as a person should adapt to many things and he or she would have to take care of themselves around the clock.
Secondly, everybody can't afford it as it is really expensive education, including spending on accommodation and flights to Russia and back.
Opponents claim that there are no good universities in Russia as their main purpose is to get a diploma, not knowledge.
I would object saying that, in Russia there are a lot of first-rate universities that can provide a good education and knowledge that are valued all around the world.
To sum up, I would like to say that despite all pros and cons you should choose the university that is suitable for you based on your own personal qualities and abilities.
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[katyavan9]

Education plays a very important role in our life. It is one of the most valuable possessions a man can get in his life.More and more people believe that you can get a better education only if you go to foreign countries. Others think that you can get a great education in Russia.
To my mind, it is not necessary to leave birthplace to get good knowledge.First of all, people,who want to study abroad should have much money. Education in Russia is cheaper but this does not mean that it is worse. Secondly, it is very difficult from the point of view of psychology. The mentality of the people of different countries is deaffers greatly. Besides, you must be intellectually developed at a high level.You must not only understand the language, but also to absorb the information you presented.
However, it is popular in our days to get education abroad. Some people are sure that there are no good universities in Russia.More than that, it is considered that you must have a diploma of international education if you want to make a very successful career or start your own big business.
I disagree with this opinion. Russia is known to have a lot of qualitative universities. Moreover, good career depends on personality. Clever, enterprising, purposeful will be able to find themselves and their vocation.
To sum up, I want to note that decision about a place where to get education is serious. And you should think about what contribution you can make in your own country.

[julia1]

Education plays the key role in our life. Many young people tend to get the education abroad, while others are against of this idea.
In my opinion, studying abroad has its advantages.
To begin with, getting education in the foreign universities expands the worldview:person can make new friends and get to know the foreign culture first-hand. Furthermore, finding yourself alone in the new country will force you out of your shell, so then you will become more confident and resolute.
Nevertheless, one should accept that education quality in russian universities is rather high. They are full of highly-qualified professors and mentors. What is more, tuition fee in foreign universities is very expensive. If you go abroad, you will leave your parents and friends behind, so some time later you may become homesick.
I disagree with this opinion, because we live in the world where employers value prospective candidates with international experience and the ability to communicate across cultures.
To draw the conclusion, I can say that getting education abroad is very prestigious and beneficial. But if you do not have a will to learn and playing a fool during educational course then there would be no difference whether you study abroad or in your own country.

[English Guru]

sumerrella, поработайте над абзацами, у Вас неправильное деление на абзацы

everybody can't afford it

not everybody can, что логично

sumerrella, хорошая работа, сделайте только правильное деление на абзацы

katyavan9, переходим к Вашему эссе

to leave birthplace

the birthplace

people,who want to study abroad should

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The mentality of the people of different countries is deaffers greatly.

differs greatly

Besides, you must be intellectually developed at a high level.

Вместо you must лучше писать one must

but also to absorb the information you presented.

but also absorb, т.к. у Вас был глагол must

Clever, enterprising, purposeful

Clever, enterprising, purposeful people

what contribution you can make in your own country.

contribution to
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katyavan9, очень хорошее эссе по смыслу + сильная аргументация. Но из-за ошибок только 12/14 баллов.

[English Guru]

julia1,

others are against of this idea.

others are against this idea.

julia1, тоже посмотрите на структуру абзацев, я давал ссылку выше.

getting education in the foreign universities

in foreign universities

person can make

a person

alone in the new country

a new country - мы же абстрактно пишем

russian universities

Russian

I disagree with this opinion, because

запятая перед because не ставиться

But if you do not have a will to learn and playing a fool during educational

playing fool - с чем согласовано? Почему -ing?

playing a fool

устойчиво без артикля

julia1, у Вас нет своего четкого мнения. Вставьте его во второй абзац.

[КристинаК]

Nowadays a lot of people think that the only way to get a good education is going to America, England or other countries. At the same time, some persons believe that there are many prestigious universities in the home country. Let us consider what advantages and disadvantages of these opinions are.

Studying abroad is more preferable to my mind. First of all, people living abroad often are different from us. So communication with them can be very useful. Secondly, overseas education gives people a lot of opportunities to change their life, meet real friends or even lovers, and see the world. What is more, a student studying abroad has to solve difficult problems and it makes him or her stronger.

However, some people say that there are countless reasons why education in an own country is better. In their opinion, it is hard to do well when your family is not next to you. Besides, there are a lot of good universities which are in a local country. Bur students do not know about them.

More and more students decide to study at universities which are located in the country where they grew up. Despite of this fact, I believe that we should not afraid of moving to other countries to get a good education because studying abroad is more advantageous.

In conclusion, I would like to say that it is very important to analyze and compare all pros and cons before making a proper decision where to get education, especially when you are young.

[English Guru]

some persons

persons - неправильно (не в том значении), правильно people

I believe that we should not afraid of

be afraid of

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[ttr]

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A good education is important to pursue a career in a modern society. So the following question arises: "Where does one get a good education?" For some people the only answer is "abroad." While others think that it is possible to study in your home country.

I think that universities abroad definitely provide a better education. First of all, studying in a foreign country gives students an opportunity to improve their language skills. Secondly, studying abroad creates a rather stressful situation so, in my opinion, students have to study harder in order to get good marks and they cannot relax all the way through the term, as it often happens when they study at their local university.

However, other people say that one can get a good education in a home country. And it is much better to do so, because living abroad alone is really hard for young people and can lead to a decrease in a quality of their studies.

I cannot agree with that. While it is definitely harder to live alone it is mostly the same as if a person moves to another city in their home coutry. Besides I believe that studying abroad gives students a lot of different opportunities in their lifes.

In conclusion, I would like to say that while studying in a foreign country is better in terms of quality, not all people have a chance to fullfill this due to different reasons. Therefore it is important for them to study really hard and take all knowledge and experience they can get from university of their choice.

[alise]

Education is the most important part of a lot of people's life. Some of them believe that it is worth it to study abroad. Others believe it is a waste of time and money. What makes them think so? Let us speculate and see what stands behind it.

I believe that to get a good education it is worth it to go abroad. Firstly, one will learn how to get with usual life problems while studying abroad. For example, how to find a suitable accommodation and a job. Secondly, studying abroad helps to improve one's knowledge of foreign languages. While studying abroad, a student can meet new friends from different countries, so he or she will certainly have a chance to learn a lot about other countries cultures. As we see, studying in foreign countries has a lot of advantages.

However, there are people who believe that going to another country for education is merely a waste of money. They claim that there many great universities in Russia and they are free to Russian citizens while foreign ones are very expensive.

I cannot but agree that universities in Europe and USA are very expensive. However, there are a lot of discounts and foundation systems, which help students to pay their tuition fees and accommodation.

To sum it up, I should consider that it is up to a person whether going abroad for education or not. We should always respect anyone's choice as there will always be two or more points of view in any question.
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[English Guru]

can lead to a decrease in a quality of their studies.

the quality of

in their lifes.

lives

from university of their choice.

the university of their choice

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a chance to learn a lot about other countries cultures.

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there many great universities in Russia

there are

and USA

the USA

whether going abroad for education or not.

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[julioyn]

Nowadays education is one of the most important parts of the social life. It defines our future in many ways. Some people believe that we can get a good education only abroad. Others are convinced there are a lot of opportunities in our country too.

In my opinion, foreign education has much more advantages than ours. Firstly, a great number of world famous scientists and specialists teach in universities and colleges in other countries. It is really useful and interesting experience to work with such professionals. Secondly, there are a lot of new technologies and special programmes for students which we have no in our educational establishments. Finally, the most prestigious universities and colleges are located abroad.

An opposite opinion is that there are enough opportunities to get a good education in local establishments. People think that we have serious teachers which are on par with foreign ones. And our technologies also let us to teach students properly.

I cannot agree with this opinion. I am sure that there are more experienced specialists and much more opportunities to achieve your goal abroad.

To sum up, I believe that foreign education is much more useful. But without any doubt, everyone should choose the university which he likes most of all. And it does not matter where it will be located.

[Cherryl]

Some people think that extreme sports help to build character.

Nowadays most people are looking for adventure to become stronger and more responsible through engaging in for extreme sports like parachute jumping, bungee jumping, mountaineering and others. However, there are many people who are against doing extreme sports as it is not safe.
Personally, I agree with the first viewpoint. Firstly, it is no wonder that extreme sports help people to increase willpower, endurance and patience. So, you can develop not only your physical abilities but also psychological abilities. This is due to the fact that they are exposed to constant danger and you have to compel themselves to overcome fear and to move forward. Secondly, some kinds of extreme sports are team sports. It means that you learn to trust and help other people you want to achieve your goals.
The opponents of this point of view strongly believe that people do not need doing extreme sports to build their character. The main reason is that in our modern world there is a range of other means of personal development, which are less dangerous like reading books and watching films.
Nevertheless, I disagree with the opposing opinion. I believe that for building character we need actions and an adrenalin rush. Doing extreme sports can help us to improve ourselves effectively.
To sum up, I am sure that extreme sports are one of the best ways to achieve this goal.