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Сообщение tanya g.l » 13.04.2015, 21:18

Nowadays people do not pay much attention to family. They prefer a successful career to a lovely family. Is family still important? Can people live without it?
In my opinion, family is the most valuable thing that people have. Family members support each other. For some reason, a person can feel unconfident or depressed. Relatives will be there for him/her to help to get through hard times. Kind words, relatives' advice and love can inspire. What is more, relatives can understand like no one else can. They respect each other's decisions and forgive all flaws. One's family members will not turn their back on a person if she/he does something wrong. In addition, people can trust their own flesh and blood because relatives never let down.
However, there are many other life values such as friendship, love, and kindness. People need a true friend who shares same interest, points of view, or even secrets. Human also cannot live without love. Love encourages to do amazing things. And what a pity place the world would be without kindness!
I can only half agree with this statement. Family develops its members' personalities, teaches them to be kind, improves their abilities. That is why, family is the most important institution.
In conclusion, I would like to say that people ought to appreciate having a family. Only one's family members do their best to make him/her happier.
P.S Спасибо за проверку :smile:
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Сообщение English Guru » 14.04.2015, 22:59

tanya g.l писал(а):life values
лучше values in life

tanya g.l писал(а):who shares same interest, points of view,
intrests или артикль

tanya g.l писал(а):its members' personalities
не всегда получается красиво, когда вы избегаете of-phrase

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The most important thing in life is family

Сообщение horych-morych » 25.04.2015, 22:07

We all live in families. But can we realize that it is the most significant part of our lives? Let us start by considering the facts.

To my mind, family is the most important thing in people's life because it is the cradle of life and love. Recent research showsthat expressions of affection towards children reduce behaviour problems. In addition, we need a family for comfort and protection. For example, when we have some problems all family members trн to help us and give us support. So, we can rely on their help whatever happens. Finally, I think it is quite lovely to have the family round and to know they are interested in me. Thus, I never feel lonely.

Nevertheless, there is an opinion that family do not play a great role in our life because it has not got any value for some people. They claim that family keeps them in captivity and imprison them from freedom. Moreover, many people want to reach success by doing their career and family is like a burden. So, they reject an idea of building a family.

I totally disagree with this opinion. I am sure that we are our own worst enemy and only we can burder ourselves, but family could not imprison people from freedom. For example, despite the fact that women bear responsibility for creating family there are many businesswomen who grow up their children as well as make their own businness.

To sum up, I want to say that people should make their own choice whether to build a family or not. I am considered that family is the meaning of human's life.
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Сообщение English Guru » 30.04.2015, 02:09

horych-morych писал(а):showsthat
shows that

horych-morych писал(а):trн
try

horych-morych писал(а):to reach success by doing their career
making their career

horych-morych писал(а):only we can burder
burden?

horych-morych писал(а):despite the fact that women bear responsibility for creating family
:eek: :eek: :eek: мягко говоря, спорное утверждение...

horych-morych писал(а):there are many businesswomen who grow up their
bring up their own children

horych-morych писал(а):I am considered
Зачем страдательный залог?

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Сообщение deanland » 12.05.2015, 17:22

Мне показалась немного не законченной одна мысль. В самом начале говорилось "They prefer a successful career to a lovely family", но в дальнейшем эта тема не раскрывалась, никаких аргументов и контр-аргументов я не заметила по этому поводу. Так вот, мне не ясно зачем это было вообще написано))
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Сообщение tanya g.l » 12.05.2015, 21:10

deanland, Я написала это предложение ,потому что решила упомянуть, что молодежь предпочитает карьеру,семья не так важна. И у меня часто бывают проблемы с логикой :smile:
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Сообщение cheglusha » 22.02.2016, 20:30

Nowadays when there are billions of people around the world, It is generally known family plays a crucial role in the life.Though some people are sure a work or friends are more important for a person.
From my point of view, if people choose family as an aim of their life they will be happy. Firstly, it seems to me that family gives large support and love to a person. People easily cope with lots of difficulties knowing that their family helps and understands them.Secondly,frequently family are not just members but also friends.Members of family enjoy spending their time together, for example, going in for sport or doing the same hobby.
In spite of these facts, there is a popular opinion today that it is silly to dedicate all life to family because first of all people should develop their skills, travel, learn the world and live for themselves not for others.
However, I disagree with this statement,I am convinced that a job and different entertainments can not make a person satisfied.It will be hard for a person does something if he or she feels lonely and unnecessary for people.
In conclusion, when both sides of the argument are looked at, I believe that for people family is the best thing in their life.
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Сообщение English Guru » 23.02.2016, 21:55

cheglusha писал(а):world, It is generally
Возможно, лучше поставить точку.

cheglusha писал(а):role in the life
in life

cheglusha писал(а):are not just members but also friends.
запятая перед but

Неплохое сочинение, но я заметил, что вы отклоняетесь от темы:
cheglusha писал(а):I believe that for people family is the best thing in their life.
Почему best? Мы должны доказать, что most important.

cheglusha писал(а):From my point of view, if people choose family as an aim of their life they will be happy. Firstly, it seems to me that family gives large support and love to a person. People easily cope with lots of difficulties knowing that their family helps and understands them.Secondly,frequently family are not just members but also friends.Members of family enjoy spending their time together, for example, going in for sport or doing the same hobby.
Мне кажется, аргументы слабоваты. Ожидается что-то вроде...когда потерял всё и всех друзей, только твоя семья поддержит в трудную минуту, не жалея ни времени, ни сил, ни денег...
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Сообщение Tatyana_sem15 » 01.06.2016, 09:49

There is an opinion that family is the most precious thing a man can have. Is it really so?
I agree with this point of view. First of all, family is always with you. They will give a hand if you need in it. Secondly, family is life partner . They helps us to make the right decision in difficult periods of our life, not to commit bad deeds. More than that, family shapes our values and personality, passes the skills and knowledge to us, provides social and moral guidance.
However, some people have an opposite opinion. They think that there are other important thing in human life. For example, job or friends. The believe that family can have a bad influence on career development . Besides, some people have difficult relationship in the family, that is why , friends are more essential for them.
But I can not agree with this point of view. Career is not waiting you at come home, money won't wipe your tears, friends not always wish you something well. If I choose between family and friends , I will choose family, of course, because they are never leave me.
In conclusion, I would like to say that nothing replaces family. They are the most significant in human life. That is why , you should be closer to them, love and appreciate your family.
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Сообщение English Guru » 03.06.2016, 12:37

Tatyana_sem15 писал(а):you need in it.
need it

Tatyana_sem15 писал(а):family is life partner .
a life partner

Tatyana_sem15 писал(а):They helps us to make
help

Tatyana_sem15 писал(а):other important thing
things

Tatyana_sem15 писал(а):The believe
they

Tatyana_sem15 писал(а):Career is not waiting you at come home
is not waiting for you at home

Tatyana_sem15 писал(а):they are never leave me
they will never leave me

Tatyana_sem15, как такая хорошая лексика может сочетаться с примитивными грамматическими ошибками?

-2 балла за грамматику

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Сообщение longredcoat » 16.08.2016, 07:38

Many people believe that family is the most significant part of one’s life. Others claim that there are plenty of different important priorities. So who is right?
In my opinion, the fact that family is priceless makes us believe in its importance. Firstly, it is well known that family is the basis of society. Therefore, people cannot purchase essential social skills without it. Secondly, family members are somebody people can always rely on. Their hearts are widely open and they will never tell the lies to each other. Moral support of the family is indispensable in the modern world full of sorrow and cruelty.
Some people take the opposite view, and claim that there are many things that are more valuable than family. They are sure that career and money can substitute family bonds.
Personally, I cannot absolutely agree with the previous opinion. There are a quantity of ways to spend money, but no one of them will save the person from loneliness and the feeling unwanted.
To sum up, I would like to say that there are a lot of substantial things in life besides the family, but people should distinguish that they are secondary. Family is the main foundation that supports people through life.
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The most important thing in life is family.

Сообщение maryoocean » 02.03.2017, 19:59

Nowadays some people choose building a career instead of relationships, while others prefer family bonds to richness. So, is family still important in modern world? I would like to express my opinion on this issue.
Personally, I believe that family is the most valuable thing in life, it is a true blessing. Firtstly, caring, loving family will always stand for you, it will always have your back, even if you ever take a false step. Secondly, a person will always be loved for who she or he is in the circle of a family no matter how wealthy and succesful she or he is. In my opinion, this is priceless.
However, some people decide to build a career, become prosperous. In other words, they strive to be men of wealth. As building a family takes a lot of time and effort, those people reject the idea of having a family.
It seems to me that rich people tend to be lonely, hence, unhappy because they have no one to rely on. Money cannot buy bliss, but family, certainly, is already a bliss.
In summary, I believe that family is some kind of foundation, constant support. It allows people to feel loved, happy, henсe, more confident so they can always become successful in another field. It is just the matter of harmonious balance between work and family, the matter of establishing right priorities and values.

:help: Проверьте, пожалуйста :pray: Спасибо.
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The most important thing in life is family.

Сообщение dasha_st » 25.05.2017, 18:25

Проверьте, пожалуйста. эссе.
Family plays an important role in the life of everyone. Every human needs a family. In Russia, there are a lot of families in which grandparents live with their children and grandchildren. Also, there are a lot of families in which people have five or more children. Family is an essential part of everyday life. And people all over the world argue about the role of family in our society.
To my opinion, family is the most important thing for everyone. Firstly, members of the family support and respect each other. Secondly, all members of family will help you in any difficalt situation. Thirdly, your family is your protection and prop.
Nevertheless, there are some people who consider that family is not so important in our society. They think that their friends ate most important people for them. They are sure that their friends will help them when they have a lot of problems.
However, i do not agree with this opinion because most of young people have friends because they are rich and clever. Also, friends can betray you in any moment.
In conclusion, i strongly believe that family is the most important thing in our life.
Only members of your family will love you despite all your wrong actions.
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Сообщение English Guru » 02.06.2017, 12:48

dasha_st писал(а):Family plays an important role in the life of everyone. Every human needs a family. In Russia, there are a lot of families in which grandparents live with their children and grandchildren. Also, there are a lot of families in which people have five or more children. Family is an essential part of everyday life. And people all over the world argue about the role of family in our society.
Вступлуние не по формату, смотрите выше у других. Надо выделить некое противопоставление, либо соотнести с более широкой проблемой.

dasha_st писал(а):To my opinion,
In my opinion,

dasha_st писал(а):all members of family
of the family

dasha_st писал(а):and prop
:weirdface:

dasha_st писал(а):their friends ate most important people for them.
:eek: :spy: :weirdface:

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