A letter to Angela - Favourite place

[Ильмира]

Today I've seen how the old building of the town library was destroyed. A new library has already opened but this old one was my favourite place in our town... What is your favourite place? What do you like about it? What do you like to do there?
My birthday is next week and I'm planning a party...

Novosheshminsk
Russia

17 May 2015

Dear Angela,
Thanks for the letter. It was great to hear from you. Sorry I haven't written for so long. I've been busy with my exams.
I'm so sorry that your favourite library was destroyed. My favourite place is my town park. I love it because it's very clean and not crowded. Sometimes I like to go to the park and read a book. It's so relaxing!
In the letter you say that you're planning a party. Have you already invited all your friends? Are you planning to have this party in your house? How are you preparing to the party?
Anyway, I must go and get on with my work.
Write back!
Best wishes,
Ilmira.
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[Proofreader]

Dear Angela,
Thanks for the letter.

* I would recommend a space between Dear Angela,

Thanks for the letter.

It's so relaxing!
In the letter you say that you're planning a party.

Put a space here also when starting a new subject.
It's so relaxing!

In the letter you say...

[Ильмира]

Спасибо, хотя сейчас и не актуально)

[English Guru]

Ильмира, создайте тему напишите на форуме, как все прошло? Какая была тема эссе?

[Ильмира]

English Guru, я создала тему) Не могли бы вы мне помочь и с разделом "Говорение"? Там есть задания, где нужно описать фото (3е задание) и сравнить фотографии (4е задание) по предоставленному плану. Я буду размещать фотографии и описания (сравнения) к ним. А вы проверяйте, пожалуйста. Просто я самоучка, учителя нет.... Поможете?

[English Guru]

Ильмира, да, присылайте! Уже совсем скоро)))