С1 Letter to Johh

[marusya]

You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend John who writes:

…Last week my mom went to New York to help my aunt with her new baby. My dad and I had to do all the housework ourselves. What kind of family chores do you normally have, if at all? What would you cook for yourself, if you had to? Do you think boys should be able to cook and to keep house, and why?

Next weekend I’m going hiking with my classmates…
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1, Komsomolskaya street
Kirov, Russia
612943
13.12.13

Dear Lohn,
I'm very glad to get a letter from you! Oh, I think it will hard to do all the housework without your mom for you. Usually I cook a dinner, wash dishes, wash floors and wipe the dust. If I had to cook for myself I would cook something easy and tasty. For example, a salad. Also I like to cook sweets. I would cook a cake. Yes, I think that boy should be able to cook and to keep house because it helps to be independent sometimes.
It's a very good idea to go to hike with your classmates. I think it will be interesting for you and it always closes people with each other. What do you going to do there? Is your class big or small? Your form-master will go with you, won't it? Tell me more about it in your following letter!

Best wishes,
Maria

[English Guru]

К вечеру проверю. А пока у Вас еще есть время найти и исправить свои грамматические ошибки :)) Они здесь есть.

[marusya]

Не вижу ошибок к сожалению :( но именно для этого я здесь!

[English Guru]

Dear Lohn,

John :D

I think it will hard to do all the housework

It will be hard - future simple от to be = will be

I cook a dinner

I cook dinner - без артикля

I think that boy should be able

boys, либо ставим артикль

It's a very good idea to go to hike with your classmates.

go hiking - go + физическая активность = герундий

it always closes people with each other

неудачная фраза... лучше сказать it helps people to become close friends with each other.

What do you going to do there?

Оооочень грубая ошибка... What are you going to do there? Всё понятно? Если нет - лучше спросите...

Your form-master will go with you, won't it?

Тоже грубовато.... Хвостик будет won't he? Почему вы выбрали IT?! Кто такой it?

Не забудьте нажать на кнопочки за нашу бескорыстную помощь! Вы реально поможете форуму.

[marusya]

marusya писал(а):
What do you going to do there?
на счет этого..нет, не совсем понятно
It - это все моя невнимательность

[English Guru]

marusya,

Смотрите,

во временах группы simple* - вспомогательный глагол TO DO
во временах группы continuous - вспомогательный глагол TO BE
во временах группы perfect - вспомогательный глагол TO HAVE

* Глагол to be во временах группы simple имеет свои формы: am/is/are/was/were/will be и не требует вспомогательного глагола!

Еще раз посмотрите таблицу времен в английском языке.

[marusya]

Спасибо) все понятно!) а проверьте пожалуйста мое сочинение по теме дисциплины и таланта С2)

[English Guru]

marusya,

сделано