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**nastyakabaeva** » 20.02.2014, 02:19

You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend Tom who writes:

Last month our class went to Washington to visit the National Museum of
American History. It was my first visit there and it was fun! How often do you go to
museums with your class, if at all? Which museum is your favorite or what
museum would you like to visit? Why do you think people should go there?
This summer we plan to go hiking with my parents.

February, 20 th
N. Novgorod
Russia

Dear Tom,

Thank you for your letter. I was glad to hear from you.

It was an amazing idea to visit the museum in Washington. I am happy that you got a good rest. My class and I go to museums very seldom, so we are not very friendly and I prefer visiting museums alone. My favorite museum is “House of Kashyrin“. Kashyrin is Maxim Gorky’s grandfather. Maxim Gorky is a well-known Russian writer, who wrote a lot of interesting story. People should visit this museum, because it is about Maxim Gorky’s childhood. You may see what he has family and mode of life.

Hike is one of the best things in the summer! Where will we go camping? How long will you be there? Will we take lots of food?

Write back soon,
Best wishes,
Nastya

**English Guru** » 24.02.2014, 03:57

nastyakabaeva писал(а):February, 20 th

Зачем выдумывать... Неправильный формат... May 27, 2013 либо 15 September, 2012

nastyakabaeva писал(а):who wrote a lot of interesting story

stories

nastyakabaeva писал(а):People should visit this museum, because it is about

Вы неисправимы.. :cry:

Там нет запятой перед because.

nastyakabaeva писал(а):You may see what he has family and mode of life.

You may see what a family he had... - порядок слов

nastyakabaeva писал(а):Hike is one of the best things

Так оставили бы герундий! Он там нужен, зачем менять? hiking

nastyakabaeva писал(а):Where will we go camping?

nastyakabaeva писал(а):Will we take lots of food?

Ээээм.. вы сейчас с кем разговаривали? :eek:

Кому вопросы адресованы? Нужно we заменить на you.

Коэффициенты:

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К2 (организация текста): 2
К3 (языковое оформление): 1

ИТОГ: 4/6

nastyakabaeva, Рекомендую Вам в этом задании поменьше "креатива", оставьте его для С2 и придерживайтесь шаблона! Не заменяйте слова, где не уверены, не ставьте лишних запятых и продемонстрируйте диалог с другом, обращаясь к нему на you.

**Nancy** » 26.02.2014, 01:46

Пожалуйста, оцените письмо ЕГЭ, С1.

Last month our class went to Washington to visit the National Museum of American History. It was my first visit
there and it was fun! How often do you go to museums with your class, if at all? Which museum is your favorite
or what museum would you like to visit? Why do you think should go there? This summer we plan to go hiking
with my parents.

9 Kalinina street
Moscow 420000
Russia
25 February, 2014

Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter. It's so nice to get news about you.

I'm glad you enjoyed visiting the National Museum. I wish I'd been
there with you. Unfortunately, I don't often go to museums.
Last month we visited the Art Gallery, which impressed
me a lot, and now it's my favourite museum in our city. I'd also like to visit
the Polytechnical Museum as I'm interested in technical
devices, you know. I think museums are greatly helpful in learning interesting facts
about history and culture, so I'm sure people should visit museums.

It's great you're going hiking with your parents this summer. Where exactly are you going? Are you going to take photos?
If yes, you'll show them to me,won't you?
Well, I must finish now.It's already midnight.
Best wishes,
Anna

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Спасибо

**English Guru** » 26.02.2014, 01:58

Мне понравилось ваше письмо - написано чисто, без ошибок, хорошим дружеским разговорным стилем, плюс вам удалось убедить проверяющего, что вы хорошо знаете грамматику.

Можно лишь подискутировать:

Nancy писал(а):It's so nice to get news about you.

Нормально, ошибки нет, но лучше to get news from you

Коэффициенты:

К1 (решение коммуникативной задачи): 2
К2 (организация текста): 2
К3 (языковое оформление): 2

ИТОГ: 6/6

**Nancy** » 27.02.2014, 12:10

Большое спасибо!Очень приятна ваша высокая оценка.

**vladtheimpaler** » 23.04.2014, 12:36

Mars
Space
14 October, 2100

Dear Jane,
I was really surprised to get this letter from you. Sorry for not writing earlier everyday i should prepare to my exams.
In your letter you asked me about museums. Me and my classmates go to our local museum as soon as there a new exhibition appears. My favorite museum is the Tretyakov gallery in Moscow i was there only one time but it impressed me so hard, can't wait to go there again. Also, i would like to visit Louvre in Paris. I think people should go to museums because everyone has to know history of art this is so enjoyable to watch paintings of popular painters or to look at sculptures.
Oh, this are great news. Where are you going? How many members of you family will go? How many days it will take?
Well... now i have to go. Please, write more often.
All the best,
Varg.

**English Guru** » 24.04.2014, 00:52

vladtheimpaler писал(а):Sorry for not writing earlier everyday i should prepare to my exams.

Sorry for not writing earlier. I should prepare for my exams every day.

vladtheimpaler писал(а):Me and my classmate

My classmates and I

vladtheimpaler писал(а):My favorite museum is the Tretyakov gallery in Moscow i was there

Используйте точку перед I (с большой буквы).

vladtheimpaler писал(а):but it impressed me so hard

лучше impressed me so deeply

vladtheimpaler писал(а):Louvre

the Louvre

vladtheimpaler писал(а):everyone has to know history of art this is so enjoyable to watch

точка....

vladtheimpaler писал(а):Oh, this are great news

грубая грамматическая ошибка - news - единственное число
this is great news

vladtheimpaler писал(а):How many days it will take?

How many days will it take?

vladtheimpaler писал(а):i have to go

I

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**Konfetka** » 01.05.2015, 15:23

Проверьте, пожалуйста:)

Moskow
Russia
01/05/2015

Dear Tom,
Thanks for your last letter. I'm sorry, I haven't written earlier but I was really busy with my school.

Well, you asked me some questions and I'd like to answer them. Actually, I and my class visit different museums two or three times a year. Hermitage is the most terrific museum I have ever visited. I'm sure everybody should go there because Hermitage is an object of Russian cultural heritage.

By the way, tell me about your summer plans. Have you already decided where are you going to hike? How much time are you planning to spend there? Will you go by car or on foot?

I'd better to go now as I have to do my homework. Hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Sveta

**English Guru** » 10.05.2015, 13:38

Konfetka писал(а):Moskow

Moscow

Konfetka, очень хорошо, 6/6

**sumerrella** » 08.03.2016, 15:24

Здравсвуйте,поверьте,пожалуйста

Moscow
Russia
7 March 2016

Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear from you again. I am sorry I haven’t answered earlier as I was really busy with my homework.

Our class often goes to the different museums and my favorite is the Tretyakov Gallery, we visited it while we were in Moscow. I liked it because there were many interesting pictures and I love art. In general, I think that museums are very important because it’s developing our creativity and helps us to know a lot about our country.

Anyway, you've mentioned holidays. Do you go hiking for the first time? Who suggested this idea? What is your route?

Well, I’d better go now. It’s time for my favorite TV show.

Write soon!
Yours,
Nastya

**English Guru** » 24.03.2016, 16:00

sumerrella писал(а):because it’s developing

are developing (museums) ... and help

sumerrella писал(а):Do you go hiking for the first time?

Will you go ...

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