A letter to Nick: project on reading in different countries

[Jimmy_Kane]

Здравствуйте) Не могли бы вы проверить? Заранее спасибо)

You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend Nick who
writes:

…I’m going to do a project on reading in different countries. Could you help
me? Do young people read as much as old people in your country? Do you
prefer to read E-books or traditional books? Why? How much time do you
and your friends spend reading daily?
As for the latest news, I have just joined a sport club…

Write a letter to Nick.
In your letter
-answer his questions
-ask 3 questionsabout Nick’s sport club
Write 100–140 words.
Remember the rules of letter writing.

Saint Petersburg,
Russia
April 19th
Dear Nick,
Thank you for your letter. It was great to hear from you again after such a long time. I really should have written sooner. I have been busy with my exams.
In my country people of all ages always read a lot. I prefer to read traditional books, because I like collect them and also I have a pain in my eyes when I read
E-books too long. Usually I and my friends read in transport because we spend a lot of time there.
It is great that you have just joined a sport club! What kind of sport club? Why did you choose that? Do you like it?
Well, I have to go now. I promised my Mom to clean the bathroom.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Lots of love,
Julia.

[English Guru]

I prefer to read traditional books, because I like

запятая перед because не нужна

I like collect them

I like to collect

I and my friends

my friends and I

Разделите текст на абзацы и получите максимальный балл! Хорошая работа!

[Jimmy_Kane]

У меня было разделено, но в итоге почему то сохраняется без них :/
Спасибо!

[English Guru]

Jimmy_Kane, тогда всё отлично. Попробуйте нажимать два раза "enter", публикуя на форум. Должен получиться абзац.

[Gates of Hades]

Проверьте, пожалуйста! :)
Ничего же, что получилось на 18 слов больше и без адреса? И в чем разница между no и not в моем случае? Искала в интернете ответ, но так и не поняла.

...Write 100–140 words.
Remember the rules of letter writing.

Hello, dear Nick!
Thank you for your letter. I was happy to hear from you again. I am sorry I have not answered earlier but I was really busy with my school. How are you?
In your letter you ask me for help. Of course, I will help you! In my view, teenagers always read more than old people in my country because exactly young people dreams and believes in other world and reality or even planets. Grown-up prefer live real-life and they usually think about their job, house or children. I prefer reading traditional books because of my vision problems. Despite this I read all my free time daily!
Well, what is your story? You have joined a sport club, haven’t you? Were you at the first meeting? Are you going to second meeting or no?
I am sorry I have better go now as I have to do my homework.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Love,
Kate
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