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[pavla]

... Last summer my parents and I went hiking to the mountains. We spent the whole week together and enjoyed it very much. How often do you take active holidays? Who do you think is the best company for you? What extreme sports would you like to try, if any, and why?
Last month our English class got an interesting project. We wrote a paper about interesting events in the past of our country ...


Moscow
Russia

7.10.13

Dear Tom,

Thanks for your last letter. I was glad to hear from you.

You asked me some questions. So, I'm ready to answer them. I take active holidays quite often. Usually I do this with my family. It's the best company for me. What about extreme sports, I'd like to try snowboarding.
You wrote me about the project. How long did you write a paper? Where did you get information about these events? Did you like the process of creating a paper or you was boring?

Write soon.

All the best,

Bill

[Elena_59]

you was boring- it was boring
Вы не ответили на вопрос почему о сноуборде. Мало слов. Можно добавить, что не сразу ответили по причине экзаменов в начале, и что мама зовет Вас помочь ей в конце. Пусть клише, но слов прибавит. В балах оценить не могу, не эксперт.

[helena70]

last letter - recent letter, last letter - последняя воля умирающего. Нет ссылки на предыдущие контакты, в адресе год не сокращается. Нарушено деление на абзацы, из трёх вопросов засчитан будет только один. Как эксперт - 2 балла!