Letter to Robert: a new town

[vladtheimpaler]

…We’ve moved to a new town. It’s small and green. My neighbours say that it hasn’t changed a bit for the last two centuries. Have you noticed any recent changes in your city? What are they? Do you like or dislike them? Why?

Yesterday my mum won a cooking competition…


Mars
Space
14 september, 2013

Dear Robert,
I was really surprised to get this letter from you. Sorry for not writing earlier everyday i should prepare to my exams.
In your letter you asked me about changes in mys city. I live in a small village and life here has never changed significantly but recently there was built a huge shopping center which spoils all views. This is an absolutely disgusting building which doesn't represent any aesthetic value. Every morning i have to walk near this place, 2 years ago i could enjoy surrounding landscapes but now you better don't put your head up cause it's a terrible around.
Oh, congratulations to mother. How many participants took part in this competition? What dish did your mother cook? Can she share a recipe with my mother?
Well... now i have to go. Please, write more often.
All the best,
Varg.

[English Guru]

14 september, 2013

September - с большой буквы

Sorry for not writing earlier everyday i should prepare to my exams.

Sorry for not writing earlier. I should prepare for my exams every day.

mys city

my

has never changed significantly but recently

запятая перед but

i have to

I с большой буквы

2 years ago i could enjoy surrounding landscapes but now you

запятая перед but

put your head up

Что это значит? Перефразируйте.

it's a terrible around.

it's terrible around - без артикля

congratulations to mother.

the mother / your mother