Letter to Andrea: shopping and pocket money

[Tory_96]

My mum often complains that I spend too much time on shopping. To tell you the truth, I like to buy beautifull things all my pocket money on small sovenirs. Do you or your friends collect anything? What do you and your friends do with your pocket money abd why? What your parents' attitude towards it?
As for the latest news, I have just entered courses

251, Krasnaya St
Moscow
Russia
2th June 2014
Dear Andrea,
Thank you for your letter! It was great to hear from you. Sorry, I have not answer earlier because I am really busy with my Hisory project.
In your letter you asked me about my hobbies. Well, I am fond of collecting vintage clothes. I like an oldshcool style and I usually go to antique shops with my friends. My parents adopt my hobbies.
By the way, let me ask you some question about your courses. Why you have decided to go on courses? How much time do you visit these club? Would you like your new hobbies?
Sorry, I would better to go now as I prepare for my exam.
Write soon!
Best wishes,
Vika

[English Guru]

I have not answer earlier

have not answered earlier

My parents adopt my hobbies.

Слово adopt не особо тут подходит, выберите share или accept

ask you some question

questions

Why you have decided to go on courses?

Why have you ... Вспомогательный глагол на втором месте!

How much time do you visit these club?

How long have you been visiting ....

Would you like your new hobbies?

Вы бы не хотели ваши новые хобби? Do you like your new hobbies?

Sorry, I would better to go now

I'd better go без to

as I prepare for my exam.

as I need to prepare or I am preparing

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