Letter to Nancy: Russian volunteers

[Tory_96]

51, Krasnaya St
Moscow
Russia
2th June 2014
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter! It was great to hear from you. Sorry, I have not answered earlier because I am really busy with my History project.
In your letter you asked me about Russian volonteer. Well, students usually work as a volonteer in various charity companies. As for me, I would like to work as a volonteer in Animal's Shelter.
By the way, let me ask you some question about your mum's healthy. Had she felt better yet? How long did she ill? What kind of music does she prefer?
Sorry, I would better go now as I need to prepare for my exam.
Write soon!
Best wishes,
Vika

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[English Guru]

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you asked me about Russian volonteer.

volunteers или вместо множественного числа поставьте артикль

Animal's Shelter

animal shelter

let me ask you some question about

Вы серьёзно?! Я вам уже два раза исправлял на множественное число! some questions

your mum's healthy

health - здоровье
healthy - здоровый

Had she felt better yet?

Не знаю, возможно лучше взять present perfect

How long did she ill?

How long was she ill?

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