Letter for Bill: projects on famous people of different countries

[Tory_96]

...At school we are doing projects on famous people of different countries. If I choose Russia whom should I write about? What is this person famous for and what do you know about him/her? Why do you think people in other countries should know about this person?
I’ve just watched an interesting wildlife TV programme...

51, Krasnaya St
Moscow
Russia
2th June 2014

Dear Bill,
Thank you for your letter! It was great to hear from you. Sorry, I have not answered earlier because I am really busy with my History project.
In your letter you asked me about russian famous people. Well, as for me I would like to choose a russian talanted author Lev Tolsloy. He wright a popular romance "War and Peace" which read all over the world.
By the way, let me ask you some questions about your plans on holiday. Which country would you like to visite? How often has you been abroad? Do you like active holiday?
Sorry, I would better go now as I need to prepare for my exam.
Write soon!
Best wishes,
Vika


Извините, что так много сообщений постаралась исправить все свои ошибки. Занималась год с преподавателем: письма, эссэ писала она мне говорила у меня не плохо выходить.
решила вам написать и тут такой позор

[English Guru]

она мне говорила у меня не плохо выходить.

Ну, как сказать, неплохо. Возможно, вначале было действительно плохо!

He wright

wrote

a popular romance "War and Peace" which read all over the world

which is read - пассивный залог

visite

visit

How often has you been abroad?

have you been

Do you like active holiday?

Либо артикль ставим an active holiday, либо множественное число active holidays, так как любое исчисляемое существительное должно иметь артикль.

Tory_96, ну вот, немного лучше.

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