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[2zemec]

Сегодня переводил текст с русского на англ про "Облачные технологии" перевел более не менее но этот абзац хуже всего, помогите пожалуйста исправить.

In the cloud at the same time launched a large number of virtual servers, do not disturbing each other. And if one or more of them stop working due to any software errors or other problems, other servers it is not affecting. Currently, large computing clouds consist of thousands of servers located in data processing center (DPC). They provide resources, tens of thousands of applications that are used by millions of users simultaneously. Cloud technology is a convenient tool for businesses that are too expensive to own ERP, CRM, or other servers that require the acquisition and configuration of additional equipment.

[English Guru]

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