Очень прошу вас проверить мое мотивационное письмо в посольство
на запрос годовой визы, в английском не сильна, а опозориться не хотелось бы

Вот текст:
April (число), 2016, Moscow.
Officer, dear Sir/Madame,
I hereby request for multiple entry Schengen visas valid for one year for me and my son
(фамилии, №№ паспортов)
We are active travelers and we always traveling by trains. We have always been properly using those previously granted Schengen visas and have never violated visa regime requirements.
Getting acquainted with traditions of different countries is our goal when traveling.
Since ( наименование страны) is a country known for its old traditions and we hope travel to (наименование страны) several times during visa validity period which is requested to be one year. We would like to visit (город) on the (даты) and later to visit other towns on (даты поездки). So, it is very important that the visas be issued for the entire period requested.
Our financial situation is quite stable. We do not represent any migration risk for (страна) and other EU member states.
Hoping we all satisfy simple requirements for getting Schengen visas valid for one year,
thanking you in anticipation of your kind decision,
Yours faithfully,
Имя, фамилия.
Заранее спасибо.