Здравствуйте! Проверьте пожалуйста. Сочинение по англ на тему "Как я провел лето" в страдательном залоге. (чтобы присутствовало простое наст., будущее и прошедшее)
During my summer holiday a lot of things were done. I was visited by my friends. A delicious cake was made by me and my mother. And it was eaten by me and my friends. A good film was seen by us and an interesting game was played also. In the evening a magazines were read by me. Next day a flat was cleaned by me . A grandmother was visited by me. Some food was brought by me for her. I was given some money. Then I was met by my friends. In the evening something interesting was made by me. Summer days have been finished. My summer holiday was spent very well! It was great! In last summer will be even better!
Спасибо!