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[fyy]

This text is about девочки которая отправилась из Шотландии в Канаду. Она впервые летела на самолете. Она летела в Канаду работать и увидеть новую страну. Skyscrapers struck her. She was impressed by size, height and speed of everything. Мэгги нравились суета и шум на улицах города. Many shops were open in the evening. She was surprised that the scenery changed very little. Мэгги понравились дома с большими верандами.

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[English Guru]

This text is about the girl who travelled from Scotland to Canada. She flew on a plane for the first time. She went to Canada in order to work and see a new country. Skyscrapers struck her. She was impressed by the size, height and speed of everything. Maggie liked the fuss and noise in the streets of the city. Many shops were open in the evening. She was surprised that the scenery changed very little. Maggie liked the houses with huge verandas.

[Fyy]

English Guru,
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