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**Antiheroe** » 30.09.2015, 16:02

Помогите перевести на английский небольшой отрывок из рассказа, очень надо.
Александр Теньков "Грибной туман"

- Когда мне было тринадцать лет, отец подарил мне книгу рекордов Гиннеса. Столько интереснейших достижений, на что только не способны люди, их силе воли, упорству, фантазии можно только позавидовать. И я во что бы то ни стало решил попасть в эту книгу. На тот момент я уже занимался спортом, много лет я усиленно тренировался, но все мои попытки стать выше, быстрее и сильнее оказались безуспешными.
- Это очень трогательная история, - Макс уже знал, что надо делать.
- Мы будем собирать грибы, в наших лесах много грибов, но нужно собрать побольше людей. Цель проекта привлечь максимально возможное количество грибников и насобирать максимально возможное количество грибов, чтобы вписать эти цифры в книгу рекордов Гиннеса. Все поддержавшие этот проект станут соучастниками этого рекорда.

**English Guru** » 30.09.2015, 22:32

Это в раздел платная помощь или ждём ваш вариант перевода, а мы подправим))

**Antiheroe** » 01.10.2015, 08:02

конечно, простите, поправьте пожалуйста

- When I was thirteen years, a father presented The Guinness Book of World Records to me. So much most interesting achievements, whatever people are only capable on, to their will-power, persistence, fantasy can only envy. And I by all means decided to get in this book. On a that moment I already went in for sports, many years I practiced increase, but all my attempts to become faster, higher and stronger was a failure.
it is very touching history, - Max knew already, that is necessary to be done.
- We will to pick mushrooms, there are many mushrooms in our forests, but it is needed to collect more people. Aim of project to attract the maximally possible amount of mushroomers and gather the maximally possible amount of mushroom pickers, to enter these numbers in The Guinness Book of World Records. All supporting this project will become accessory of this record.

**English Guru** » 01.10.2015, 11:04

Antiheroe писал(а):When I was thirteen years

When I was thirteen

Antiheroe писал(а):So much most interesting

There are so many interesting ...

Antiheroe писал(а):to their will-power, persistence, fantasy can only envy.

one may only envy heir will-power, persistence and fantasy.

Antiheroe писал(а):On a that moment

At that time

Antiheroe писал(а):many years I practiced increase,

I had been training heavily

Antiheroe писал(а):was a failure

were

Antiheroe писал(а):it is very touching history

a very touching story

Antiheroe писал(а):- We will to pick mushrooms

We will pick mushrooms

Antiheroe писал(а):but it is needed to collect more people.

we need to gather more people

Antiheroe писал(а):Aim of project

The aim of the project is to

Antiheroe писал(а):mushroomers

mushrooms, насколько я понял по исходнику

Antiheroe писал(а):accessory of this record

accessories to

Соберите всё воедино, нужно еще раз всё прочитать.

**Cherry** » 01.10.2015, 14:07

в history нельзя употреблять вместо story? это ошибка? history - это только в плане истории можно сказать??

**English Guru** » 01.10.2015, 16:36

Cherry писал(а):в history нельзя употреблять вместо story?

Обычно нельзя. Частные случаи употребления смотрите в англо-английских словарях!

**Antiheroe** » 02.10.2015, 11:10

- When I was thirteen, a father presented The Guinness Book of World Records to me. There are so many interesting achievements, whatever people are only capable on, one may only envy heir will-power, persistence and fantasy. And I by all means decided to get in this book. At that time I already went in for sports, I had been training heavily, but all my attempts to become faster, higher and stronger were.
A very touching story, - Max knew already, that is necessary to be done.
- We will pick mushrooms, there are many mushrooms in our forests, we need to gather more people. The aim of the project is to attract the maximally possible amount of mushrooms and gather the maximally possible amount of mushroom pickers, to enter these numbers in The Guinness Book of World Records. All supporting this project will become accessories to this record.

И еще меня смущает accessories

**English Guru** » 02.10.2015, 13:55

Antiheroe писал(а):a father presented

my father

Antiheroe писал(а):people are only capable on

people are only capable of

Antiheroe писал(а):stronger were.

were a failure.

Antiheroe писал(а):Max knew already, that is necessary to be done.

... that it needed to be done.

Antiheroe писал(а):И еще меня смущает accessories

Согласен, у этого слова - негативная коннотация... Думайте, как перефразирвать...

**Antiheroe** » 02.10.2015, 15:55

- When I was thirteen, my father presented The Guinness Book of World Records to me. There are so many interesting achievements, whatever people are only capable of, one may only envy heir will-power, persistence and fantasy. And I by all means decided to get in this book. At that time I already went in for sports, I had been training heavily, but all my attempts to become faster, higher and were a failure.
A very touching story, - Max knew already, that it needed to be done.
- We will pick mushrooms, there are many mushrooms in our forests, we need to gather more people. The aim of the project is to attract the maximally possible amount of mushrooms and gather the maximally possible amount of mushroom pickers, to enter these numbers in The Guinness Book of World Records. All supporting this project will become accomplices to this record.

Попробовал accessories заменить на accomplices.

**English Guru** » 02.10.2015, 17:26

Antiheroe писал(а):my father presented The Guinness Book of World Records to me.

my father presented me The Guinness Book of World Records.

Antiheroe писал(а):only envy heir will-power

only envy their will-power

Antiheroe писал(а):higher and

higher and stronger

Теперь хорошо))

**Antiheroe** » 02.10.2015, 17:41

- When I was thirteen, my father presented me The Guinness Book of World Records. There are so many interesting achievements, whatever people are only capable of, one may only envy their will-power, persistence and fantasy. And I by all means decided to get in this book. At that time I already went in for sports, I had been training heavily, but all my attempts to become faster, higher and stronger were a failure.
A very touching story, - Max knew already, that it needed to be done.
- We will pick mushrooms, there are many mushrooms in our forests, we need to gather more people. The aim of the project is to attract the maximally possible amount of mushrooms and gather the maximally possible amount of mushroom pickers, to enter these numbers in The Guinness Book of World Records. All supporting this project will become accomplices to this record.

Огромнейшее спасибо за помощь

**Antiheroe** » 03.10.2015, 10:10

уважаемый English Guru, и еще такой вопросик, как правильно в соцсетях типа поделись с 3 друзьями - share on a 3 friend's timeline или 3 share on friend's timeline?

**English Guru** » 04.10.2015, 00:50

Antiheroe, share it with 3 friends via social networks

**Antiheroe** » 07.10.2015, 16:34

а если просто "распространите это"?

**English Guru** » 07.10.2015, 18:15

Antiheroe, они говорят share обычно, на фейсбуке так..

**Antiheroe** » 08.10.2015, 08:19

да, конечно, я тоже так думал, большое спасибо за помощь

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