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[Olya]

In July this year on the screens out the 5th part of the famous series of films about the Terminator. I watched almost all the films in this series and the new movie "Terminator Genesis" I was able to look at the big screen cinema.
Starring famous, perhaps all, Arnold Schwarzenegger, and Jason Clarke, Emilia Clarke, by the way, she played a major role in the TV series Game of Thrones, Jai Courtney and many others. The film is directed by Alan Taylor. He is one of the directors of the series "Game of Thrones"
The very plot of the film is difficult to describe. Because all the movies Terminator associated with time travel. John Connor, one of the main characters in the film, the head of the Resistance, the sergeant sent Kyle Reese back in time to the last was able to stand up for his mother - Sarah Connor. However, during the journey it takes the time lag, and the sergeant gets into an alternate version of the past. And now he has not only to save Sarah Connor, but also change the future.
The film I liked. The atmosphere, music, special effects, all with the level. Despite the fact that the genre this movie belongs to the adventure and thriller was quite a lot of funny moments. For example, Shvartsneygera smile and his jokes.
The film is very exciting and I advise everyone to see it. I think that you will not regret.

[English Guru]

In July this year on the screens out the 5th part of the famous series of films about the Terminator.

Перефразируйте, не вижу сказуемого

I was able to look at the big screen cinema.

to watch, конечно!

Starring famous, perhaps all, Arnold Schwarzenegger,

не понял, перефразируйте

The film I liked.

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special effects, all with the level.

перефразируйте

that the genre this movie belongs

the genre of this movie belongs

Shvartsneygera smile

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