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[Юлька]

Ira: I'm so sorry that now on our country house we can seldom see a hare, squirrel and other wild animal.
Tonya: If you look on the bright side, the rabbits didn't spoil the trees in winter.
Ira: But when we bought the country house, we were really hoping that would see not only pets and plants.
Tonya: I was very sad to say that, but a human takes in wild animals all more and more living space.
Ira: If only people can live near animals and not obstructing each other…
Tonya: Looking at it from a different viewpoint, I would say that last time people do a lot for protecting wild nature…
Ira: You are right. But not all people and not always do. Perhaps on our country house life will become more interesting. As we say, tomorrow will be better…

[English Guru]

on our country house

НА доме?

and other wild animal.

or another wild animal.

that would see not only pets and plants.

we would see

takes in wild animals

If only people can live near animals and not obstructing each other…

could live .... and not obstruct - однородные члены

But not all people and not always do.

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