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In our planet millions problems , relating to all people or a certain part of population.
Global warming,it affects us all.Our planet is getting hotter and hotter.We can save on electrisity and save energy , riding a bike or walking.
War,it applies mostly to a certain part of the population. It's the destruction of houses , death of people due to bombs , projectilis , it's a big fear.People ,debending their homeland, go to war , quik to peace.
Endangered species of animals , it also affects us all, as well as nature.Recently , more and more endangered species , for example because they are hunted for fun . Of course we can help animals , just protect and not killing them