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Florence Nightingale is one of important people in the history of nursing. She was born in Italy in 1820, while her parents traveled around Europe, but she lived in England as a child. When Florence was seventeen years old she was interested in nursing. She visited sick people in villages, and also went to look hospitals. She wanted to become a nurse, but her parents didn't agree.
In 1854 the Crimean War started. Britain, France and Turkey were at war with Russia. The hospitals for the British soldiers were very bad. Florence Nightingale wanted to help, so she went to Istanbul with a group of thirty-eight other nurses.
Soon, everybody in Britain said about Florence and her work with the British soldiers. In 1856, Florence Nightingale came back to Britain and opened the Nightingale school for Nurses at St. Thomas’ Hospital in London. The nurses at school studied for one year.
Florence Nightingale wrote several books. Her famous book “Notes on Nursing”, explained how to become a good nurse. She also had things to knew about hospital buildings, and knew that clean rooms and beds were important in healthcare.

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The nurses at school studied for one year.

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