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Какие есть грамматические ошибки? Какие предложения лучше построить как-то иначе? Да и вообще. что стоит исправить?

N., the student of B4203 group of direction «History» of School of Humanities showed herself as an interested, diligent student as demonstrated by her high progress. N. involves actively on practical employments, often offering an original vision for some of discussing problems. Here is noticed an independent work of the student, as of studying disciplines’ questions, so in total due to direction of preparation chosen by her. In addition, in spite of N. studies only on second course she had showed an interest to a science work preparing an announcement for the annual student conference conducted by School of Humanities.