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[Sharly1222]

The Halloween is one of the most popular festival in the English-speaking countries, which celebrates in night on 31-st October. People wear awful costumes and draw horrible make-up on their faces. Also you are able to go in diverse houses and ask people: "Trick-or-treating?" Then some person gives a lot of sweets and cookies. A lot of children in America celebrates the Halloween. I want to participate in this festival.

[Elena_59]

Halloween-без артикля
festivals
is celebrated
at night on the 31 of October
awful и horrible- это другое Я бы сказала People dressing up in frightening masks and costumes knock on the doors yelling " Trick or treat"
a lot of children celebrate