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**Olga3395** » 23.07.2014, 10:41

Добрый день, проверьте, пожалуйста, следующие рассказы. Спасибо
A bad day in my life
I had driving lessons when I was twenty. Although I was a quick learner, I failed my first test. I was really disappointed. I failed on parking. The policeman said me to stop, but I finished moving. It was a gross mistake because there was an inhibition sing. The problem was I got so nervous during the test that I couldn’t drive property. It was a bad day in my live. Then I took the test again and I passed. It was a very good day! And although I have a licence I don’t drive now because I don’t have a car.
Story
It was a cold, dark morning, and a tall man in a grey coat was standing on the station platform. Then the train arrived, and the man quickly got on. He left a small bag on the platform and the train closed the door. The man shouted but the train was moving quickly and quickly. The man was feeling himself awful because he left not only all own things but also the important documents, which were in his bag too. The man got off next station, took a taxi and came back to the starting point. He was lucky. When he came his bag was on a bench still. He bought an another ticket and set on the bench for waiting next train. However, when the train arrived the man was sleeping. So he missed this train. It was the worst day in his life.

**English Guru** » 27.07.2014, 22:42

Olga3395 писал(а):said me

told me

Olga3395 писал(а):The policeman said me to stop, but I finished moving.

Не понял... continued moving?

Olga3395 писал(а):there was an inhibition sing.

compulsory sign - в словаре есть пометка авто

Olga3395 писал(а):The problem was I got so nervous

The problem was that I

Olga3395 писал(а):property

properly (странные у вас опечатки, Ворд подсказывает?)

Olga3395 писал(а):the train was moving quickly and quickly.

quicker and quicker

Olga3395 писал(а):The man was feeling himself awful

himself убираем - очень грубая ошибка, не копируйте то, как мы говорим по-русски

Olga3395 писал(а):not only all own things

his own things .... еще запятая перед but

Olga3395 писал(а):his bag was on a bench still.

his bag was still on the bench.

Olga3395 писал(а):He bought an another

ну куда ж артикль запихнули? не нужен.

Olga3395 писал(а):set on the bench for waiting next train.

sat on the bench to wait for the next train.

**Olga3395** » 28.07.2014, 11:34

спасибо

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