Эссе: "Parents often do not understand their teenagers"

[Софи]

Nowadays, parents have the problems when their children become teenagers. Parents are sure that they do not pay attention to what do and say. And teenagers think that their parents do not understand them.
In my opinion, parents do not notice that a teenager is not a child and has his own ideas of future life.
Firstly, parents do not approve of children's clothes and dislike their tasties in music. They should understand that theirs are old-fashioned.
Secondly, parents want their children to follow their model of life. Probably, they forget that every generation is different from another and has its own values
As far as parents, their children can make the mistakes without the parents' advices.
First of all, they wish a hapiness for their children. Therefore parents control a life's teenager and give usefull lessons. But teenagers do not want to listen to them.
Beсides, the teenagers talk with parents rudely. And often they do not tell about their problems.
I disagree with it. Parents should have confidence in their children and a lot of patience.
In conclusion, in families where there is comprehension and love between their members there is no generation gap.

[Cherry]

Прочитала, вроде бы все понятно без гугл- переводчика Сами писали или со словарем?

[Софи]

Писала сама
Пока что скудный словарный запас

[Lola]

Та же проблема со словарным запасом нужно больше синонимов знать, а текст понятен

[English Guru]

have the problems

have the problems - множественное число...зачем определенный артикль?

pay attention to what do and say.

Не хватает подлежащего в придаточном предложении, например they - to what they do or say.

his own ideas

his or her own ideas

the parents' advices.

advice - неисчисляемое существительное

they wish a hapiness

wish happiness

Therefore parents control

Therefore,

a life's teenager

Что это значит? Перефразировать.

usefull

useful

Beсides

Besides

Софи, Это эссе для егэ? Если да, то я перенесу его в правильную тему.

[Софи]

English Guru, спасибо большое
да, это эссе для ЕГЭ